kyoko terasaki (kt2786) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Okay.
00 is of very good design and Japanese paper money fits inside them properly,
so is perfect for Japanese market.
We changed an order sheet and removed 00.
Please send the only items that you have stocks about the rest of them.
Please revise the order form. When you show us the total, we'll pay as soon as possible.

When it is possible for you to send 00s, you can do them to us.
Personally I prefer old logotype to new one but it may be just unfamiliar.
We'll send catalog photos of products which we took.

修正後
Okay.
00 is of very good design and Japanese bills fit inside them properly,
so is perfect for Japanese market.
We changed an order sheet and removed 00.
For the rest, please send me the only items that you have stocks.
Please revise the order form. When you show us the total amount, we'll pay it as soon as possible.

When it is possible for you to send 00s, you can do it.
Personally I prefer old logotype to new one but it may be just unfamiliar.
We'll send catalog photos of products which we took.

元の翻訳
Than you for contact us.
You made a successful bid of a wrong mount lens, didn't you?
E-PL3 has a mirrorless lens and runs on the one named M,ZUIKO.
We can accept your returning for mount different lens but please send the item to the place of the address below first. As soon as the item reaching, we'll refund the money deducting a shipping charge from PayPal.
Best regards.

修正後
Than you for contacting us.
I understand you bid for a lens with a wrong mount, correct?
E-PL3 is a mirrorless camera and its compatible lens is called M,ZUIKO.
We can accept your return due to a wrong mount but please send the item to the address below first. As soon as the item arrives, we'll refund the money minus the shipping cost through PayPal.
Best regards.

元の翻訳
この品を、書かれてある住所宛てに返送します。公正のため、送料を払うことになりますが、私が払う必要はないと思います。元の品物代金とカナダ・オンタリオ州・トロントへの送料を合わせて、アメリカ＄で２００ドルの返金をお願いします。その後、商品を返送します。それから、１００パーセント肯定的なフィードバックを書きこみます。これまでずっとあなた方の商品とサービスに満足してきましたから。

修正後
この品を、書かれてある住所宛てに返送します。私が払う必要がないとは思いますが、公平でありたいため、その送料は払わせていただきます。元の品物代金とカナダ・オンタリオ州・トロントへの送料を合わせて、アメリカ＄で２００ドルの返金をお願いします。その後、商品を返送します。それから、１００パーセント肯定的なフィードバックを書きこみます。これまでずっとあなた方の商品とサービスに満足してきましたから。

元の翻訳
この提携は、中国のeコマース分野においてAlibabaの優勢に、Tencentが切り込もうと挑戦する動きの一つである。上記の取引において、TencentはＪDの１５％の株を獲得した。さらに、同社はeコマースのサイトをJDに移動させ、 巨大なユーザーベースを商業化させるため、WeChatとMobile QQ のサービスをＪＤに統合させた。ＪＤは大きくなり、この提携後、Alibabaに急速に追いついた。

修正後
この提携は、中国のeコマース分野においてAlibabaの優勢に、Tencentが切り込もうと挑戦する動きの一つである。上記の取引において、TencentはＪDの１５％の株を獲得した。さらに、同社はeコマースのサイトをJDに移動させ、 巨大なユーザーベースを商業化させるため、WeChatとMobile QQ のサービスをＪＤに統合させた。ＪＤは成長し、この提携後、Alibabaに急速に追いついた。

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I'm not good at speaking English, so cannot call you.
I found the page where I guess your twitter is.
As I followed you, would you follow me back?
When you do it, we can exchange messages each other.
My titter acount is 〇〇.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me.
I'm not good at speaking English, so cannot call you.
As I searched your ebay name on Google, I found the page where I guess your twitter is.
As I followed you, would you follow me back?
When you do it, we can exchange messages each other.
My titter acount is 〇〇.

元の翻訳
The prescribed number of arrival of goods is 3 for 〇 and 1 for ☆. About 〇, one customer has already reserved before you so you can reserve only one.
you have bought our goods before and are ◇’s friend so how about $40 in total ( 1 for 〇 and 1 for ☆）？ We offer a $5 discount.

A shipping charge in Japan for ◎ is 412 yen.
Please confirm it to look at the attached note calculated payment of money. ( total:25918 yen, per person:8639yen)
I f you also buy 〇, you need not to pay a commission of 〇(the price is 400yen) and if you are OK for us to pack it with ☆, the shipping charge is also free.

修正後
The prescribed number of arrival of goods is 3 for 〇 and 1 for ☆. Regarding 〇, as one customer has already reserved before you, you can reserve only one.
Since you are returning customer, and are ◇’s friend, I offer you $40 in total ( 1 for 〇 and 1 for ☆） with $5 discount.

A shipping charge in Japan for ◎ is 412 yen.
Please confirm it to look at the attached note calculated payment of money. ( total:25918 yen, per person:8639yen)
I f you also buy 〇, you need not to pay a commission of 〇(the price is 400yen) and if you are OK for us to consolidate it with ☆, the shipping charge is also free.

元の翻訳
Sep. 27th (Sun) 'AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014' Performers are desided!

We can experience bodily sensations of supreme 'sound' that is the pride of Japan and supreme ' food' that is the pride of AOMORI in large-sized open-air festival, 'AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014.
We disided DAICHI MIURA and BLUE TOKYO will perform on Sep. 27th (Sun).
Please look at the official website concerning the information of preceding tickets or something.

修正後
Sep. 27th (Sun) 'AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014' Performers are decided!

We can feel the supreme 'sound' that is the pride of Japan and the superb ' food' that is the pride of AOMORI in a large-sized open-air festival, 'AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014.
We decided DAICHI MIURA and BLUE TOKYO will perform on Sep. 27th (Sun).
Please look at the official website concerning the information about pre-order sale for tickets or something.

元の翻訳
" Yama-chan &Mika presents MORNING EXITING TIME! "　with Yuna Sekine and Marina Suzuki

On June 9th At HBC Radio "Yama-chan &Mika presents MORNING EXITING TIME"(9:00～１１：００）
http://www.hbc.co.jp/radio/
With Yuna Sekine and Marina Suzuki

修正後
"Yama-chan & Mika presents MORNING EXCITING TIME! " with Yuna Sekine and Mariya Suzuki

On June 9th (Mon) at HBC Radio "Yama-chan & Mika presents MORNING EXCITING TIME!" (9:00～11:00)
http://www.hbc.co.jp/radio/
With Yuna Sekine and Mariya Suzuki