翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

Aの曲を弾きながらステージに登場可能ですか？その流れでBの曲とは別に、彼とその曲の短いセッションをすることは可能ですか？彼の最近の活動を教えてくれませんか？こちらとしても是非○月に来日を実現したいのですが、その時期は大型連休と重なっているため、今メディアの状況を探ってます。実現した場合、ファンとのイベントやラジオ出演ができればと思ってますが問題ないですか？来日する場合は合計何人になりますか？○月が難しい場合、○月でも調整可能ですか？来日する場合はパリから直接ですか？

英語

Will you possible to go on the stage with playing the music A? On the atmospherics, will you possible to do a short setting of the music with him other than the music B? Can you kindly let me know what he is acting recently? We really woud like you to visit Japan in ○, however we are now seeking how will media behave due to the golden week holidays. If I can visit to Japan, I will prefer to be on a radio channel as well as an event with fans. Will this no problem with you? How many staffs in total will be, if I visit Japan? In a case, ○ does not work for my visiting Japan, will ○ be possible to be shceudled ? Will you directly come to Japan from Paris?

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kj4translationはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/06 19:56:03

元の翻訳
Will you possible to go on the stage with playing the music A? On the atmospherics, will you possible to do a short setting of the music with him other than the music B? Can you kindly let me know what he is acting recently? We really woud like you to visit Japan in ○, however we are now seeking how will media behave due to the golden week holidays. If I can visit to Japan, I will prefer to be on a radio channel as well as an event with fans. Will this no problem with you? How many staffs in total will be, if I visit Japan? In a case, ○ does not work for my visiting Japan, will ○ be possible to be shceudled ? Will you directly come to Japan from Paris?

修正後
Will you possible to go on the stage with playing the music A? On the atmospherics, will you possible to do a short setting of the music with him other than the music B? Can you kindly let me know what he is acting recently? We really woud like you to visit Japan in ○, however we are now seeking how will media behave due to the golden week holidays. If you can visit to Japan, I want you to be on a radio channel as well as an event with fans. Will this be no problem with you? How many staffs in total will be, if you visit Japan? If it's difficult to come to Japan in ○, will ○ be possible to be shceudled ? Will you directly come to Japan from Paris?

来日するのは you （先方）だと思います。

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やっぱりそうですよね。最後までどちらか確信が持てませんでした。ご指摘くださってありがとうございます。またよろしくお願いいたします。