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We modified the expression which is differnt from the fact.

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We modified the explanatory statements which were slightly different from the facts.

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I ask you about this deal many times via e-mail and chat.
I can't understand why you found that there is no stock available more than three weeks after I had ordered.

when can I get this Rug? Could you arrange to make it possinble for me to get it in a week?

I experienced this kind of situation 6 times.
Nothing has been improved.
Please confirm that there is no items in this kind of situation.

This deal must be canceled.
Please refund immediately.Thank you.

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I ask you about this deal many times via e-mail and chat.
I can't understand why you found that there is no stock available more than three weeks after I had ordered.

when can I get this Rug? Could you arrange to make it possinble for me to get it in a week?

I experienced this kind of situation 6 times.
Nothing has been improved.
Please confirm whether there is any other item in a similar situation.

This deal must be canceled.
Please refund immediately.Thank you.

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Dear Laura

Hello.I received the product today.
I will try it as soon as possible.

By the way, I have several questions to you.
1. To selling electric devices in Japan, you need to get PSE , the law regulating the safety of electric products.
Is this item certificated by PSE?
2. It takes 16 days to get the item after payment. How long will it take to get items if I order again?
The next order may be 12 items.
3. I would like you to reply me in English.

Looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

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Dear Laura

Hello.I received the product today.
I will try it as soon as possible.

By the way, I have several questions to you.
1. To sell electric devices in Japan, you need to get approved of PSE, the law guaranteeing the safety of electric products.
Is this item certificated by PSE?
2. It took 16 days to get the item after payment. How long will it take to get items if I order again?
The next order may be 12 items.
3. I would like you to reply to me in English.

Looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Dickは、幼少期に接した叔父たちの中で1番好きだった。
彼が学生だった頃、訪問客が頻繁に訪れ、歓迎された。訪問客達は、両親や他の大人たちとの会話に時間を割きつつ、子供達に注意を払ってくれた。
彼は私達の良きゲーム相手であり、私達の周りに広がる世界に目を向けさせてくれた先生でもあった。

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私は幼少期に接した叔父たちの中でDickが1番好きだった。
彼が学生だった頃、訪問客が頻繁に訪れ、歓迎した。訪問客達は、両親や他の大人たちとの会話に時間を割きつつ、子供達に注意を払ってくれた。
彼は私達の良きゲーム相手であり、私達の周りに広がる世界に目を向けさせてくれた先生でもあった。