katrina_z (katrina_z) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Her team succeeded in her first concert due to her untiring efforts and strength of mind never give up .

She is supported with various ways among fans, and a nickname "kakka (閣下)" and character "nowano (のヮの)" were created.

At first, I misunderstood that "Is she a wicked?", but that was needless anxiety!

If she were in the real world, she would be a true popular idol!

Her charm is filled in the latter half of the cartoon.

Of course,the game is good, but I recommend you the cartoon !

修正後
Her team succeeded in her first concert due to her untiring efforts and strength of mind to never give up .

She is supported in various ways among fans, and the nickname "Her Excellency (閣下)" and character "nowano (のヮの)" were created.

At first, I mistakenly thought "Is she wicked?", but that was needless anxiety!

If she were in the real world, she would be a true popular idol!

Her charm is filled in the latter half of the cartoon.

Of course, the game is good, but I recommend the cartoon!

元の翻訳
Haruka Amami is "a typical idol ".

She is so popular character in this work that plays the leading part in this cartoon.

Her trademark is "red ribbon" and appeal is "cheerfulness and effort".]

Her cheerfulness changes the dark atmosphere around her, her words encourage many characters in this cartoon.

She is very frank and cheerfulness, and spares no effort to be the idol.

I was touched by her attitude "make maximum effort as possible as she can".

修正後
Haruka Amami is "a typical idol ".

She is such a popular character in this work that she plays the leading part in this cartoon.

Her trademark is her "red ribbon" and her appeal is her "cheerfulness and spirit".

Her cheerfulness changes the dark atmosphere around her, her words encourage many characters in this cartoon.

She is very frank and cheerful and spares no effort to be an idol.

I was touched by her attitude to "work as hard as she possibly can."

元の翻訳
In order to get Nike Warranty, you need to have the receipt of purchase. If it is more than one year since the date of purchase, it will not be able to receive a warranty. The ring of the belt is completely broken, it can not be fixed. And honestly it's useless to be fixed. Sorry, but we have to return it. Please tell me where is your address to return the good. Thank you for your support.

修正後
In order to get the Nike warranty, you need to have your purchase receipt. If it is more than one year since the date of purchase, you will not be able to receive a warranty. The ring of the belt is completely broken, it cannot be fixed. And, honestly, it's useless to fix. Sorry, but we have to return it so please tell me where is your address to return the item. Thank you for your support.

元の翻訳
Thanks for contacting me.
I'm glad to get 20 for 360$.
Make sure to let us buy it.
How long does it take to arrive in Florida?
Also, can I buy this product again in the future?
Thank you.

Because I've never transfered money to foreign country before, I'll transfer 10$ for practice.
That's why, please give/tell me the information.
1000$ is the minimum quantity order. I agree!
I've thought to purchase about 2000$ on April 1st.
I'll try to list it one time.
I'm waiting to hear from you!!

修正後
Thanks for contacting me.
I'm glad to get 20 for $360.
Please allow us to buy it.
How long does it take to arrive in Florida?
Also, can I buy this product again in the future?
Thank you.

Because I've never transfered money to a foreign country before, I'll transfer $10 for practice.
So please tell me the information.
$1,000 is the minimum quantity order. Understood!
I'm thinking to purchase about $2,000 on April 1st.
I'll try to list it one time.
I'm waiting to hear from you!!