Lara (kanon84) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your interest.
I have the link on ebay and Japan Post.
The product has been shipped on September 20th 2014 at 3:59 pm safely.
Please do not worry.
Also, I used EMS for shipping this time, so it will arrive to you within a few days.
The tracking number is EG311716418JP, as stated on eBay.
Thank you for your patience until the item arrives.
Thank you for using my store this time.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me anytime.

修正後
Hello.
Thank you for your interest.
I have checked the link on ebay and Japan Post myself.
The product has been shipped on September 20th 2014 at 3:59 pm safely.
Please do not worry.
Also, I used EMS for shipping this time, so it will arrive to you within a few days.
The tracking number is EG311716418JP, as stated on eBay.
Thank you for your patience until the item arrives.
Thank you for using my store this time.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me anytime.

元の翻訳
Due to the status of our stock, we will be shipping the relevant items separately this time.
As for the figures, it is possibles that they may have been stopped at customs.

修正後
Due to the status of our stock, we have shipped this item separately this time.
As for the figures, it is possible that they may have been stopped at the customs.

元の翻訳
Shirogane Aoi Ike (Hokkaido)

The surface of the lake amounts to 12000 square meters, and it is 2.5 to 5 meters deep. It looks blue when seen from the land, but its waters are transparent and has no strong acidity, so the cause of its mysterious color is unknown.
The image of a shot of this beautiful lake has been chosen as a desktop wallpaper for Apple's MacBook Pro.

The reason the water of Aoi Ike is blue is that water containing aluminum from the "Shirahige no taki" falls in Shirogane hot spring resorts flows into it.

(The falls originate from an undercurrent that springs out of the middle of a cliff.)

修正後
Shirogane Aoi Ike (Hokkaido)

The lake area amounts to 12000 square meters, and it is 2.5 to 5 meters deep. It looks blue when seen from the land, but its water is transparent and has no strong acidity, and the cause of its mysterious color is unknown.
The image of a shot of this beautiful lake has been chosen as a desktop wallpaper for Apple's MacBook Pro.

The reason the water of Aoi pond is blue is that water containing aluminum from the "Shirahige no taki" falls in Shirogane hot spring resorts flows into it.

(The waterfall originates from an undercurrent that springs out of the middle of a cliff.)

元の翻訳
It is written that the items are all original so they can't be chosen.
I sell them as it is written.

修正後
It is written that the items are all made originally one by one, so they can't be chosen.
I sell them as per stated in the description.

元の翻訳
Regarding the sewing machine
The part where I wrote ○○ means that I have not tried other functions besides straight and zigzag sewing.
I have tried the basic operations.

The voltage for this CD player is 100w.
I do not know if it will work without a transformer.
Using a transformer would be safer.

The white part is a flower design.
The body is engraved with the design of a Japanese old house.
The material is iron.

修正後
Regarding the sewing machine
The part where I wrote ○○ means that I have not tried the functions other than straight and zigzag sewing.
I have checked the basic operations.

The voltage for this CD player is 100v.
I do not know if it will work without a transformer.
Using a transformer would be safer.

The white part is a floral design.
The body is engraved with the design of a Japanese old house.
The material is iron.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

Did the product not arrive?
We will check what the situation is. We are sorry but please wait about 3 days for this.
Regarding the product, if it has been lost or if there has been a mistake in the delivery, we will reship it via EMS. Thank you very much for your patience.

We apologize for the trouble caused.

修正後
Thank you for your message.

Has the product not arrived yet?
We will check what the situation is. We are sorry but please wait about 3 days for this.
Regarding the product, if it has been lost or if there has been a mistake in the delivery, we will reship it via EMS. Thank you very much for your patience.

We apologize for the trouble caused.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I am relieved and happy to know that you received the car safely.
If you take good care of it, you can probably still use it for a long time.
Thank you very much for doing business with us.
We look forward to seeing you again.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me.
I am relieved and happy to know that you received the car safely.
If you take good care of it, you can still use it for a long time.
Thank you very much for doing business with us.
We look forward to seeing you again.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I am relieved and happy to know that you received the car safely.
If you take good care of it, you can probably still use it for a long time.
Thank you very much for doing business with us.
We look forward to seeing you again.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me.
I am relieved and happy to know that you received the car safely.
If you take a good care of it, you could use it for a long time.
Thank you very much for doing the business with us.
We look forward to seeing you again.

元の翻訳
As I informed you yesterday, if do not cancel and agree to our terms, we will send you the pre-release of this item on the release date, August 28th.
It should take 8 to 14 business days for it to arrive.

修正後
As I informed you yesterday, if you do not cancel but agree to our terms, we will send you the prerelease item on the release date, August 28th.
It should take 8 to 14 business days for arrival.

元の翻訳
As I informed you yesterday, if do not cancel and agree to our terms, we will send you the pre-release of this item on the release date, August 28th.
It should take 8 to 14 business days for it to arrive.

修正後
As I informed you yesterday, if you agree to our terms without cancellation, we will ship the pre-release item to you on the release date, August 28th.
It should take 8 to 14 business days for delivery.

元の翻訳
As I have told you before, your product will be on sale on August 30th, 2014. It shows as if it has been shipped, but this is only for Amazon procedures and it has not actually been shipped yet.

I sent you the information by email on the day stated below.

You can cancel your order anytime, so please feel free to let me know if that is what you wish.
In that case, it would be smoother if you do so within 3 days of the product coming out on sale.

修正後
As I have told you before, your product will be on sale on August 30, 2014. It shows as if it has been shipped, but this is only for Amazon procedures and it has not actually been shipped yet.

I sent you the information by email on the day stated below.

You can cancel your order anytime, so please feel free to let me know if that is what you wish.
In that case, it would be smoother if you do so within 3 days of the product release date.