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Arte↵
Espinaのツイードの絨毯は、どのような部屋にも映えるような鮮やかなデザインが特長です。それぞれの絨毯はEspirelleのアクリルを100%使って手で束ねられており、1平方メートルにつき、2900グラムもの重さがあります。↵
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Espirelleは、ウールのような見た目と手触りを持つ、とてと頑丈で丈夫な材質です。またEspirelleは洗濯やメンテナンスも簡単で、ほとんどの染みは水で落とせてしまいます。TUV/TFI品質シールとOko-Tex水準は、環境に順応し、健康被害を引き起こさないことを100%保証するものです。遊び心に溢れたオリジナルのデザインは、飾りとしても、または個性あふれるデザインとしても、若い精神を育て、新しい可能性を広げます。↵

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Arte Espinaのツイードの絨毯は、どのような部屋にも映えるような鮮やかなデザインが特長です。それぞれの絨毯はEspirelleのアクリルを100%使って手で束ねられており、1平方メートルにつき、2900グラムもの重さがあります。Espirelleは、ウールのような見た目と手触りを持つ、とても頑丈で丈夫な素材です。またEspirelleは洗濯やメンテナンスも簡単で、ほとんどの染みは水で落とせてしまいます。TUV/TFI品質シールとOko-Tex水準は、これらの商品が汚染物質基準に適合し、健康被害を引き起こさないことを100%保証するものです。遊び心に溢れたオリジナルのデザインは、若い人も嬉しい気分になり、新しい可能性を広げます。飾りとしても、個々のデザインにも適しています。

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William

I would like to suspend on making a decision to purchase this attractive products this time as there is no sales data in Japan which makes it difficult to see how big the needs are here in Japan.

habit

I am interested in R1 shallow face. Is that the same item as the BRAND NEW TaylorMade R1"Tour issue" Driver Head w/ TP SLEEVE, which has been updated in ebay before?

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William

I would like to suspend on making a decision to purchase this attractive products this time as there is no sales data in Japan which makes it difficult to see how big the needs are here.

habit

I am interested in R1 shallow face. Is that the same item as the BRAND NEW TaylorMade R1"Tour issue" Driver Head w/ TP SLEEVE, which had been updated in ebay before?

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Golf

I am appreciating that you have bargained the price of RBZ10.5 for me. However, let me order the items next time as I still have enough stocks available.

Marcus

I am planning to order 10pieces of Tour Issue R11S T3 Head. I would give up of buying RBZ9 as I want a new product.
Version 2 means for the ex RBZ Version 2, not stage 2.
If I can order, please let me know.

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Golf

I appreciate that you gave me a bargain for RBZ10.5. However, let me order next time as I still have enough in stock from my previous purchase.

Marcus

I am planning to order 10pieces of Tour Issue R11S T3 Head. I would give up of buying RBZ9 as I want new products.
Version 2 means for the ex RBZ Version 2, not stage 2.
If I can order, please let me know.

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Golf

I am appreciating that you have bargained the price of RBZ10.5 for me. However, let me order the items next time as I still have enough stocks available.

Marcus

I am planning to order 10pieces of Tour Issue R11S T3 Head. I would give up of buying RBZ9 as I want a new product.
Version 2 means for the ex RBZ Version 2, not stage 2.
If I can order, please let me know.

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Golf

I am appreciating that you have bargained the price of RBZ10.5 for me. However, let me order the items next time as I still have enough stock.

Marcus

I am planning to order 10pieces of Tour Issue R11S T3 Head. I would give up of buying RBZ9 as I want the new product.
Version 2 means for the ex RBZ Version 2, not stage 2.
If I can order, please let me know.

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We would like to use this picuture as a product if the condition is agreed. How should we deal out with the rights? Could
you kindly tell us how we should apply for the
right as there is yet no licensing company and also the prices. Is the composor mentioned in song A credited as an arranger? Is there
any problem if we regard it is A? After making it sure the rights, we will decide
the picture we record
this time. How is the making process going on? Please keep us updated as we would like to plan next year's schedule.

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We would like to use this picture as a product if the condition is agreed. How should we deal out with the rights? Could
you kindly tell us how we should apply for the
right as there is yet no licensing company and also the prices. Is the composor mentioned in song A credited as an arranger? Is there
any problem if we regard it is A? After making it sure the rights, we will decide
the picture we record
this time. How is the making process going on? Please keep us updated as we would like to plan next year's schedule.

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Please never handle the issue irresponsibly.
According to your homepage, it is guaranteed for a one-year warranty. Where can I find information for the three-month warranty for a part? Please let me know where I can find this information. In case there is no information written, unfortunately I can not let you handle in the way you want to handle. If I can not see any improvement on how you deal out with the issue, I will take complains and claims to the ebay.
Please send the defect part to the address mentioned below.

Do you believe how you are dealing out can be an acceptable one? You can drop the trust in the society.

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Please handle this issue in appropriate manner.
According to your homepage, it clearly states that the products are guaranteed for a one-year. In my opinion, it does not state "3months" so if it does state 3months, please indicate the specific sentence so that I could refer to it. If there is no reply or no information as such, I would take this step forward and send claims to ebay.
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Please send the defect part of the product to the address mentioned bellow as soon as possible.

I believe that your actions will change how the society`s trust. Please kindly make appropriate actions. ↵
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Thank you. ↵

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Audio Home Theatre Expo will be held in Time↵
24, Odaiba, Tokyo from 18 to21 of October, held by the Japan Audio Organization.

In addition to showing the Audio machines and many seminars and listening experiences, many events are planned like people can enjoy the high resolution audio player which is highly rumored, the demonstration of supervision (8K) picture by NHK and new music introduction by Casiopea 3rd, a live music by female quartet group and handicrft class, and also the experience in the combination component, open recording of the music bird and so on.

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"Audio Home Theatre Expo 2013" sponsored by Japan Audio Organization will be held at Time 24 Building in Odaiba Tokyo, from 18th to 20th of October.

In addition to displaying audio components, seminars and auditions, many events are planned such as people can enjoy the high-resolution audio player, the demonstration of supervision (8K) picture by NHK and a new music introduction by Casiopea 3rd, live music by female quartet group, music studios, an audition of a combination component stereo, a public recording of the music bird and so on.

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⚫〜⚫ 2012
Managed the online shopping site in the company. Got a better results by improving the way of purchasing the stocks and the selling method.
Enhanced the new stock suppliers
Numbers of the orders made ⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Increased the numbers of the line-up items ⚫items-⚫items(⚫% compared to the previous year)

Planned numerous Special Discount Sales Plans, including the Time Sale at night, improving the surplus by enhancing the more effective operation using the smartphones, developing the operation system and cancelling the telephone call service and simlifised it into only on the Web site.

No one has enough knowledge with regards to making the Health Check Reservation like me. Also I always put it into a consideration to establish a comfortable system for the customers and the telephone operators,using the experiences as an telephone operator.↵

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Major achievements
⚫〜⚫ 2012
Managed the online shopping site in the company. Got a better result by improving the way of purchasing the stocks and the selling method.
Enhanced the new stock suppliers
Numbers of the orders made ⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Increased the numbers of the line-up items ⚫items-⚫items(⚫% compared to the previous year)

Planned numerous Special Discount Sales Plans, including the Time Sale at night, improving the surplus by enhancing the more effective operation using the smartphones, developing the operation system and cancelling the telephone call service and simlifised it into only on the Web site.

No one has enough knowledge with regards to making the Health Check Reservation like me. Also I always put it into a consideration to establish a comfortable system for the customers and the telephone operators,using the experiences as an telephone operator.

元の翻訳
01/Apr/2010

Been appointed
to the Director of buying the stocks in Service Department.

01/Dec/2011
Director of the direct Marketting
Always absorbed self in establishing the new department, enhanced the skills and gained confidence with the growth of the Centre.

I am confident in the Management which is indispensable in running the Centre, especially by establishing the system which is aiming the biggest effects by making the individual workers at the centre of the stage to make them gain more knowledge. No other people than I would have sufficent knowledge in making the Health Check Reservation. Also I always bear in mind of putting self in the customer's shoes, using the experience as a phone Operator.

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01/Apr/2010

Been appointed
to the Director of buying the stocks in Service Department.

01/Dec/2011
Director of the direct Marketing
Always absorbed self in establishing the new department, enhanced the skills and gained confidence with the growth of the Centre.

I am confident in the Management which is indispensable in running the Centre, especially by establishing the system which is aiming the biggest effects by making the individual workers at the centre of the stage to make them gain more knowledge. No other people than I would have sufficent knowledge in making the Health Check Reservation. Also I always bear in mind of putting self in the customer's shoes, using the experience as a phone Operator.

元の翻訳
history with a Phone Call Service Centre

01/Apr/2002

Joined the Phone Call Service Centre as an service operator

Awarded the Excellent operator award within Newlwy Hired workers.

01/Jul/2007
Been appointed to the supervisor in the contact Service Centre, established the Life Service Department, after being in charge of the Domestic Stay Department.

01/Apr/2008
Been appointed to the Chief supervisor.
Encouraged the multi-skilled environment in the Domestic Stay and the Life Service.

01/Apr/2009
Been appointed to the Vice Director in the Contact Service Centre

Numbers of the call made-⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Sold ⚫→⚫Yen(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Balance Regained the surplus.

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history of Call Center

01/Apr/2002

Joined the Call Center as an service operator

Awarded the Excellent operator award within Newlwy Hired workers.

01/Jul/2007
Been appointed to the supervisor in the contact Service Center, established the Life Service Department, after being in charge of the Domestic Stay Department.

01/Apr/2008
Been appointed to the Chief supervisor.
Encouraged the multi-skilled environment in the Domestic Stay and the Life Service.

01/Apr/2009
Become Vice Director of the Contact Service Centre

Numbers of the call made-⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Sold ⚫→⚫Yen(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Balance Regained the surplus.

元の翻訳
The contents of the Intermatiomal Meeting Exposition(IME) has been announced on 7 October in Tokyo. Thanks to the fact that to have utilized the promotional events by the Nikkei BP, which has contributed in planning and managing, the previous expo has recorded 3197 people, the biggest number to have participated. They have come up with the new programme and improved on the existing programme, aiming more peopre to participate and the increased effect in the expo with B to B colour.

After the exhibition on 11, IME expositor and incentive show case key person opinion excange party, which has newly planned this year, will be held in Shinagawa Prince Hotel.

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The contents of the International Meeting Exposition(IME) have been announced on 7 October in Tokyo. Thanks to the fact that to have utilized the promotional events by the Nikkei BP, which has contributed in planning and managing, the previous expo has recorded 3197 people, the biggest number to have participated. They have come up with the new programme and improved on the existing programme, aiming more people to participate and the increased effect in the expo with B to B colour.

After the exhibition on 11, IME expositor and incentive show case key person opinion excange party, which has newly planned this year, will be held in Shinagawa Prince Hotel.