Miho A (jolie0617) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I have some questions about the "price" before the shipment.

・Should I only put the exact amount for the product on "Price"?
If there's any extra fee for domestic shipping, will it be added up on "price"?

・If I agree without clicking the "confirm" button, any disadvantage or penalty?

・After I fixed the ”Price", this message below came out.



Please let me know how should I handle it.
Would you like me to send a photocopy of the bill by e-mail?

修正後
I have some questions about the "price" before the shipment.

・Should I only put the exact amount for the product in "Price"?
If there's any extra fees for domestic shipping, should it be added to "price"?

・If I agree without clicking the "confirm" button, is there any problem or penalty?

・After I modified the ”Price" upwardly, this message below came out.



Please let me know how I should handle it.
Would you like me to send a photocopy of the bill by e-mail?

元の翻訳
Certainly! I will send it to your address which you mentioned after I finish with painting.↵
would ESM shipping work for you? Though it costs a little more than regular shipping, I think it's better because it's faster and safer.
If you have any particular shipping you would prefer or anything you need in Japan, please don't hesitate to ask.

I'll send you e-mail when I'm ready for the shipping anyway.

So, you're having baby! Congratulations and wishing your baby's health and happiness!↵
Well, we can always have fun with making radio control parts, but the time you can see and enjoy, spend time with your child growing in NOW, and there will be never the same moment. I guess the radio control can wait,so we better postpone it for a while. LOL

修正後
Certainly! I will send it to your address which you mentioned earlier after I finish with painting. Would EMS shipping work for you? Though it costs a little more than regular shipping, I think it's better because it's faster and safer.
If you have any particular shipping method you would prefer or anything you need in Japan, please don't hesitate to ask.

I'll send you an e-mail when I'm ready for shipping.

So, you're having a baby! Congratulations and wishing you for your baby's health and happiness! Well, we can always have fun with making radio control parts, but the time you spend and enjoy with your child growing is NOW, and there will never be the same moment. I guess the radio control can wait, so we better postpone it for a while. LOL

元の翻訳
もしまだでいらっしゃるようなら、私達がお願いした取引の仕入れ書をどうぞご用意下さい。
もしくはすでにお願いした取引の仕入れ書を準備いただいているのであれば、どうか問屋/仕入れ先に私達がお願いした輸出に関しての追加情報もご用意頂くようお願いします。
必要であれば、カスタマーサービスのほうで追加情報を要約したものをご用意できます。

もしこの商品を問屋に返品したい場合、郵送の注文をキャンセルするのに私どもまでご一報下さい。
もし何のご連絡も頂けない場合や、お願いした情報がこちらに送れられなかった場合、取引をキャンセルさせて頂きます。

追加情報、もしくは何かお手伝いが必要ならその旨を添えて、ご返信頂きますようお願いします。

修正後
もしまだでいらっしゃるようなら、私達がお願いした商品のインボイスをどうぞご用意下さい。
もしくはすでにお願いしたインボイスを全部準備いただいているのであれば、どうか売主/仕入れ先に私達がお願いした輸出に関しての追加情報もご用意頂くようお願いします。
必要であれば、カスタマーサービスのほうで追加情報を要約したものをご用意できます。

もしこの商品を売主に返品したい場合、郵送の注文をキャンセルするのに私どもまでご一報下さい。
もし何のご連絡も頂けない場合や、お願いした情報がこちらに送れられなかった場合、取引をキャンセルさせて頂きます。

追加情報、もしくは何かお手伝いが必要ならその旨を添えて、ご返信頂きますようお願いします。

元の翻訳
生憎ですが、私達はアメリカへの輸出に関する規定に応じるのに必要な情報を得ることが出来ませんでした。
遅れてしまった原因には、このような2つの理由が考えられます。

1、 私達は追加した売買仕入れ書を特定のパッケージとして貴方に求めましたが、まだ私達はそれを受け取っていません。

２、私達は取引先と問屋に取引情報を求めましたが、そのどちらも連絡がとれないか、求めた情報をお送りしていただいていないかだからです。

修正後
生憎ですが、私達はアメリカの輸出規定に応じるのに必要な情報をまだ得ておりません。
遅れてしまった原因には、このような2つの理由が考えられます。

1、 私達は特定の荷物の追加の商業インボイスを貴方に求めましたが、まだ私達はそれを受け取っていません。

２、私達は販売者、問屋に商品の情報を求めましたが、そのどちらも返事が来ていないか、求めた情報をお送りしていただいていないかだからです。

元の翻訳
Healing the trauma needs doctors help. The child who is damaged from divorce of their parents has a very complex emotion and pain which he or she can not express to their friends or others.
Doctor should be able to open up their mind, really listen to the child's pain and thoughts,and give him or her advise to support their life, so that the child could help themselves more.
If doctor notice the changes of the child's behavior, such as being neglectful for homework or also being disobedient, doctor needs to inform that immediately to the child's parents. ↵
Doctor and parents need to help each other to heal the child's wound.
They can ask for help to administration that assists financial problem if they need to do so.
Divorce of a couple who has a child have to be prudent and they should ask advice from not only friends but administrations and organizations so that they can avoid their child have deep wound. ↵

修正後
A support from a teacher is very important for a child who is traumatized by parents' divorce. The child who is traumatized by the divorce of his/her parents usually has a very complex feeling and emotional pain which he or she can not express to his/her friends.
Teachers should be able to help the child to recover from the trauma by really listening to the child's feelings and thoughts and by giving him or her advise to support their life so that the child could pull themselves together and get better.
If teachers notice some changes of the child's behaviors, such as neglecting homework or being disobedient, they need to contact the child's parents and try to deal with the problems with the parents.
Parents can ask some administration agencies that assist financial problem for help if they are suffering from financial problems.
Parents should deal with their divorce carefully especially if they have children. It is important that they ask some advice from not only friends but professional organizations to minimize the negative effects of a divorce to their children.

元の翻訳
Then she had pregnant before she graduated high school and had married with a man who is very much older than her.
Like her case, divorce of parents could affect their children's lives tremendously. Even if it is happened in her infancy, it still could affect and shadow her life after she grow up, like many study said.
For instance, having distrust for others by experience the divorce of the parents would keep her away from making intimate relationship, also not value marriage but career

If you're in the situation and you do think it's inevitable, please put your best effort to protect your child's heart from traumatized.

修正後
Then she had pregnant before she graduated high school and had married with a man who is very much older than her.
Like her case, divorce of parents could affect their children's lives tremendously. Even if it is happened in her infancy, it still could affect and shadow her life after she grew up, like many study said.
For instance, having distrust for others by experience the divorce of the parents would keep her away from making intimate relationship, also not value marriage but career.

If you're in the situation and you do think it's inevitable, please put your best effort to protect your child's heart from traumatized.