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Lunaさんこんにちは。最後に私が日本からデジタルカメラを購入したとき、メニュー言語が英語ではなく日本語で来ていたのに加えてマニュアルも全て日本語でした。この問題についてはどんなご購入予定者の方も知りたいことだと思いますので、商品説明欄に記載していただけますか。よろしくお願いします。 Nick Czudyより。

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Lunaさん、こんにちは。最後に私が日本からデジタルカメラを購入したとき、メニュー言語が英語を選ぶ方式ではなく日本語であったのに加えてマニュアルも全て日本語でした。この問題についてはどの購入予定者の方も知りたいことだと思いますので、商品説明欄に記載していただけますか。よろしくお願いします。 Nick Czudyより。

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Stadio live sound will be on air by "FLiPLiPS"!

With a guitarist, SHO KAMIJO, we will provide you with a live sound!

FM802 "FLiPLiPS"
Date : 12/9(Tue) 11a.m. to 3p.m.

http://funky802.com/flip/

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Stadio live sound will be on air by "FLiPLiPS"!

With a guitarist, SHO KAMIJO, we will provide you with a live sound!

FM802 "FLiPLiPS"
Date : 12/9(Tue.) 11a.m. to 3p.m.

http://funky802.com/flip/

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Do you mean that you want XX with $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.↵
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without a shipping fee.

This is pretty special price since we've had a business before.
Please consider our proposal.

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Do you mean that you want XX for $200?

It will be difficult for us to give you that price, as we will end up with losing money.

We can sell it for $XX, excluding the shipping charges.

This is pretty special price since we've had a business before.
Please consider our proposal.

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Do you mean that you want XX with $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without a shipping fee.

This is pretty special price since we've had a business before.
Please consider our proposal.

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Do you mean that you want XX for $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without shipping fee.

This is a very special offer since we've done business with you before.
Please consider our proposal.

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Today, December 3rd (Wednesday), We released a new single "Fureaudakede -Always with you- / IT'S THE RIGHT TIME"! (Fureaudakede : By only touching you.)

It contains a "Fureaudakede - Always with you-" which is a long waited CD of NIVEA brand TV-CM song in 2014, a "IT'S THE RIGHT TIME" which is the ending theme of a rumored TV anime show called "KiseiJu Sei no kakuritsu" and also a "Bring it Down" which is a main theme of d video original drama, "Hung".

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Today, December 3rd (Wednesday), We are releasing a new single "Fureaudakede -Always with you- / IT'S THE RIGHT TIME"! (Fureaudakede : By only touching you.)

It contains "Fureaudakede - Always with you-" which is a long waited CD of NIVEA brand TV-CM song in 2014, "IT'S THE RIGHT TIME" which is the ending theme of a rumored TV anime show called "KiseiJu Sei no kakuritsu" and also "Bring it Down" which is the main theme song of the d video original drama, "Hung".

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If a recipient is absent, you can leave this package in the mailbox.

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If a recipient is not at home, you can leave this package in the mailbox.

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We contacted Japan Post Office regarding the damage of your guitar case.
We were informed that there was still no response from UK.
Was there any contact from the post office to you?
How do you want it to be solved.
For example, refunding a portion of repair fee or replacing it with a new case.

We understand your feeling.
As you are pointing out, it was not fair to you to say our concenience.
If we may, is refund of $** acceptable for you?

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We contacted Japan Post regarding the damage of your guitar case.
We were informed that they haven't had any response from UK.
Have you had any news from the post office?
How do you want it to be solved?
For example, refunding a portion of repair fee or replacing it with a new case.

We understand your feeling.
As you have pointed out, it was not fair to you to say our concenience [spelling].
If we may, is refund of $** acceptable to you?

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こんにちは。　私たちからの返信をメールで受け取られているといいのですが。お伝えいたしました通り商品に問題はありません。最初からそのように作られているのです！

すべてのジーパンはこれらと同じようになっております。（私たちがここに持っているジーパンも含めて）
もしイタリア製のものでなかったら返金いたしますがイタリア製であるならお支払いしかねます。
残念ですが、以前に書かせていただきました通り、製品は正常です。
ですが返送することは可能です。

私たちは本物の品物しか販売いたしません。イタリア製ではなかったでしょうか。
もし違っていたのでしたらジーパンについて記述間違いをしてしまったことになります。
お知らせください。

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こんにちは。　私たちからの返信をメールで受け取られているといいのですが。お伝えいたしました通り、商品はすばらしく、そのように作られているのです！

すべてのジーンズはこれらと同じようになっております。（私たちがここに持っている　ジーンズも含めて）
イタリア製のものでなかったら返金いたしますが、イタリア製であるならお支払いしかねます。
残念ですが、以前に書かせていただきました通り、製品はオリジナルです。
ですが返送することは可能です。

私たちは本物の品物しか販売いたしません。イタリア製ではなかったでしょうか？
もし違っていたのでしたら、上述したジーンズに関して間違いをしてしまったことになります。
お知らせください。

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Your package left Japan in the middle November, but we can not trace it any further.
It seems the processing work of Mexico Post delays a lot.
The product which has been over seven months since the shipment can not be returned.
This decision is in line with Amazon's return policy.
We are sorry that we could not be of your help but please understand.

We have couple things we would like to ask you.
Are you saying that there was no product in a box with this order?

Also you placed only one order with $22 as shown in the attached image, but are you sure you placed four orders with $46?

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Your package left Japan in mid-November, but we can not trace it any further.
We may expect significant delays in Mexico Post's processing.
A product that was shipped over seven months ago can not be returned.
This decision is in line with Amazon's return policy.
We are sorry that we could not be of your help but please understand.

We would like to ask you a couple of things.
Are you saying that there was no product in the box with this order?

Also you placed only one order with $22 as shown in the attached image, but are you sure you placed four orders with $46?

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PDN雑誌に掲載するのにふさわしい写真を送付ください。Adobe 1998かsRGB, タグ付されていないカラープロファイルの形式で11x17"@300dpiのサイズが好ましいです。
詳細：長い方の寸法で5,500ピクセルに近いサイズの写真が推奨されています。本解像度ではない画像であっても長い方の寸法で3,300から8,000ピクセルの範囲であれば受け入れることができます。

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PDN雑誌に掲載するのにふさわしい写真を送付ください。推奨サイズはAdobe 1998かsRGB, タグなしカラープロファイルの形式で11x17"@300dpiです。
詳細：推奨サイズは長い方の寸法で5,500ピクセルに近いサイズです。本解像度ではない画像であっても長い方の寸法で3,300から8,000ピクセルの範囲であれば受理できます。

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Please check a new spray gun you are shipping by using water. I will ship a defective product tomorrow so please send me a new one as soon as you confirmed my shipment.
As I said, a product being defective affected my work a lot. I need it as soon as possible. Also, I need put the name and price of the product on EMC label but what should I put if the it is for return?

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Please check a new spray gun you are shipping by using water [awkward]. I will ship a defective product tomorrow so please send me a new one as soon as you confirm my shipment.
As I said before, the defective product affected my work a lot. I need it [unclear antecedent] as soon as possible. Also, I need put the name and price of the product on [article] EMC label but what should I put if it is for return?