翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

()を＄200で欲しいという事ですか？

さすがに厳しいです。
赤字になってしまいします。

最低（）送料別でなら販売可能です。

以前もお取引させて頂いたので、かなりの特別価格です。
ご検討ください。

英語

Do you mean that you want XX with $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without a shipping fee.

This is pretty special price since we've had a business before.
Please consider our proposal.

レビュー ( 2 )

413kiraline_はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/12/15 12:37:16

元の翻訳
Do you mean that you want XX with $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without a shipping fee.

This is pretty special price since we've had a business before.
Please consider our proposal.

修正後
Do you mean that you want XX for $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without shipping fee.

This is a very special offer since we've done business with you before.
Please consider our proposal.

[413kiraline_]

Good translation !

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/12/16 10:56:12

元の翻訳
Do you mean that you want XX with $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.↵
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without a shipping fee.

This is pretty special price since we've had a business before.
Please consider our proposal.

修正後
Do you mean that you want XX for $200?

It will be difficult for us to give you that price, as we will end up with losing money.

We can sell it for $XX, excluding the shipping charges.

This is pretty special price since we've had a business before.
Please consider our proposal.