藤田志保子 (haruharuharu) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I would like to purchase all of them.
However, I'm worried about the products getting stopped at the customs when importing them into Japan.
Do you think they will be stopped?
Do you have any experience exporting these products directly to other Japanese clients?
I would like to build a wonderful business relationship with you.

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I would like to purchase all of them.
However, I'm worried about the products getting stopped at the customs when importing them into Japan.
Do you think they will be stopped?
Do you have any experience exporting these products directly to other Japanese clients?
I would like to build a good business relationship with you.

元の翻訳
UK
I apologise for contacting you over and over again.
I will not re-list your products in the future.
Would you please consider withdrawing your complaint to B?
I will appreciate your understanding in advance.
I wish you all the best for your business.

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UK
I apologise for contacting you over and over again.
I can not re-list your products in the future.
Would you please ask B to consider withdrawing B's complaint about you?
I will appreciate your understanding in advance.
I wish you all the best for your business.

元の翻訳
Then she had pregnant before she graduated high school and had married with a man who is very much older than her.
Like her case, divorce of parents could affect their children's lives tremendously. Even if it is happened in her infancy, it still could affect and shadow her life after she grow up, like many study said.
For instance, having distrust for others by experience the divorce of the parents would keep her away from making intimate relationship, also not value marriage but career

If you're in the situation and you do think it's inevitable, please put your best effort to protect your child's heart from traumatized.

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Then she had pregnant before she graduated high school and had married with a man who is very much older than her.
Like her case, divorce of parents could affect their children's lives tremendously. Even if it is happened in her infancy, it still could affect and shadow her life after she grew up, like many study said.
For instance, having distrust for others by experience the divorce of the parents would keep her away from making intimate relationship, also not value marriage but career.

If you're in the situation and you do think it's inevitable, please put your best effort to protect your child's heart from traumatized.