Fidelio (fidelio) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
最終的にはこうした特徴により、長期的により多くのプレイヤー獲得が可能なAndroidに対し、開発会社から更なる注目を集めるのは当然のことだ。Googleのより大きな目標、すなわちAndroidがより多くの人々の手に渡り、より多くのディバイスに組み込まれるようにするという目標を成し遂げられる。

修正後
最終的にはこうした特徴は、ゲーム開発者がAndroidに注目することを促すはずで、それにより長期的により多くのゲーマーを味方につけることができるでしょう。これはすべて、Googleのより大きな目標、すなわちAndroidをより多くの人々の手に渡り、より多くのディバイスに組み込まれるようにするという目標を満たすものです。

元の翻訳
We stayed in Ghent about 1 hour but could enjoy our stay there thanks to a very effective walking tour. After all, I think that a highlight of this trip is Bruges.
Bruges was a town which you can feel the atomosphere of the medieval era than I thought. The sightseeing by boat was elegant and we could see beautiful views so many times. We stayed about 3 hours there but we could see enough and it was very satisfying. We thought that travelling a long time by coach would be tiring but the coach was bran-new style and clean so it was very comfortable.

修正後
We stayed in Ghent about 1 hour but could enjoy our stay there thanks to a very effective walking tour. After all, I think that a highlight of this trip is Bruges.
Bruges was a town which you can feel the atomosphere of the medieval era than what I thought. The sightseeing by boat was elegant and we could see beautiful views so many times. We stayed about 3 hours there but we could see enough and it was very satisfying. We thought that travelling a long time by coach would be tiring but the coach was a bran-new style and clean so it was very comfortable.

元の翻訳
It was a best day.
It was a all day tour and we were very worried that it might spoil that day but it was totally fine and end up as a best day. The tour guide who also was a driver, was not too friendly and
very nice. We could see that the tour guide prioritize a satisfaction of travellers and took lots of photos at popular spots. On the way back, the tour guide said that it would be late and asked each traveller where they wish to be dropped off. It was a very nice tour. Thank you.

修正後
It was the best day.
It was an all day tour and we were very worried that it might spoil that day but it was totally fine and ended up being the best day. The tour guide who also was a driver, was not too friendly and
very nice. We could see that the tour guide prioritize the satisfaction of travelers and took lots of photos at popular spots. On the way back, the tour guide said that it would be late and asked each traveler where they wish to be dropped off. It was a very nice tour. Thank you.