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Thank you for your message
We apologize for our inefficiency that have caused you inconvenience.

If you cannot ship it to Japan, we can issue a refund.
You can still have the battery.
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Would you prefer a refund?

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Thank you for your message
We apologize for our inefficiency that has caused you inconvenience.

If you cannot ship it to Japan, we can issue a refund.
You can still have the battery.
Appearing below shows the difference of the batteries .

Would you prefer a refund?

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I have something to ask you.
A rug mat will be arrived from "Anthropologie" with the tracking number "1Z28763V0388719748".
It is the product I already canceled, but shipped out for some reason.

When it arrives, could you please refuse to receive it?
Thank you.

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I have a favour to ask you.
A rug mat will arrive from "Anthropologie" with the tracking number "1Z28763V0388719748".
It is the product that I already canceled, but shipped out anyway for some reason.

When it arrives, can you please refuse to receive it?
Thank you.

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I receive a message that the products were shipped, but I sent you an e-mail to cancel the order yesterday.
Please check it.

Regarding the products sent, I will tell the transfer company to apply to the procedure or refusing to accept it.
Or could you please stop the delivery company to deliver the products from your side?

I didn't get the products I wanted because of your side's mistake.
However, the shipping fee for returning is expensive.
So I will give it up this time.

Please make cancellation of "Y113709294" this time.
Please show some responsibility to deal with this because it is your mistake.
Thank you.

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I received a message that the products were shipped, but I already sent you an e-mail to cancel the order yesterday.
Please confirm this.

Regarding the products sent, I will tell the transfer company to refuse to accept it.
Or could you please stop the delivery company from delivering the products from your side?

I didn't get the products I wanted because of your side's mistake.
However, the shipping fee for returning is expensive.
So I will give it up this time.

Please cancel the order "Y113709294" this time.
Please show some responsibility when dealing with this because it is your mistake.
Thank you.

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I am sorry for my belated reply. According to the wholesale dealer, the item should arrive sometime. I will let you know once I hear the news.

So you learn the tea ceremony? That sounds fantastic.
When I was a high schooler, I used to do the tea ceremony as a club activity. However it has been so long ago and my memory is ambiguous...
I remember I was once served with a Ayu fish shaped Japanese sweet at one of those ceremonies held in this season.
The sweet (gyu-hi) wrapped with a chewy texture is called AYU, and it is my favourite.
I will try my best to introduce as cute items as possible. Kind regards,

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I am sorry for the late reply. According to the wholesale dealer, the item should arrive sometime. I will let you know once I hear any further news.

So you learn the about tea ceremony? That sounds fantastic.
When I was a high school student, I did the tea ceremony as a club activity. However it has been so long that I don't remember it very well...
I do remember I was once served an Ayu fish shaped Japanese sweet at one of those ceremonies held during this season.
The sweet (gyu-hi) wrapped with a chewy texture is called AYU, and it is my favourite.
I will try my best to introduce as many cute items as possible. Kind regards.

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Hekko. I'm Tanaka.
I'm sorry to cause you some trouble, but would that be possible for you to put my order #04294975 and # 04274759 together?
That would be nice if you could adjust the postage, too.
Thank you very much.

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Hello. My name is Tanaka.
I'm sorry to cause you trouble, but would that be possible for you to put my order #04294975 and # 04274759 together?
It would be nice if you could adjust the postage accordingly as well.
Thank you very much.