armitage_chiang_01_04 (armitage_chiang_0708) — もらったレビュー

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The schedule above may be changed uninformed due to the flight company, weather, misfortune or the local situation.
There might be flight changed or cancelled by weather. The unexpected cost of the transportation due to the cancelled or delayed flight would have to be payed on customers own. We hope you could understand.

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The schedule above may be changed without previous notification due to the flight company's circumstances, weather, natural disasters or the local situation.
The flight may be cancelled depending on the weather on the day of departure. The customer is responsible for costs of transportation or extended stay caused by a cancelled or delayed flight. Thank you for your understanding.

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Also, it is possible to get more attention from the potential clients through the promotion approach of the website had been mentioned. Actually, there are successful cases that the products we promoted got opportunities.
That is because we could simply introduce the exhibits with the videos. We take the video on the 1st day of the exhibition at the booth, then edit the video at our company. The video length will be about three minutes. We'll add Japanese subtitles to the video. Everyone can easily watch the video not only on the computers but also smart phones. You can use our service quickly and effectively with reasonable price.

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Also, it is possible to get more attention from the potential clients through the promotion approach of the website had been mentioned. Actually, there are successful cases that the products we promoted got opportunities.
Now we could simply introduce the exhibits with the videos. We take the video on the 1st day of the exhibition at the booth, then edit the video at our company. The video length will be about three minutes. We'll add Japanese subtitles to the video. Everyone can easily watch the video not only on the computers but also on smart phones. You can use our service quickly and effectively with a reasonable price.

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We are the only company who made the playstation video for exhibition in Japan. We suggest that making about 3 minutes of demonstration animation of your playstation product to promote it.
The following is our animation website. The product description of each company could be found.
We send this kind of videos to the potential customers via e-mail. The potential customers includes attendees which had exchanged business cards, the exhibitors, customers on your customer list, and also the related company which we investigated.

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We are the only company who makes exhibition presentation motion video in Japan. ↵
We propose to do sales promotion by making 3-minute-long presentation video of your product on exhibition.
The link below is the web site with video we produce. You can see the explanation of products from our clients.
We send this kind of videos to the potential customers via e-mail. The potential customers includes attendees which had exchanged business cards, the exhibitors, customers on your customer list, and also the related company which we surveyed.

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From left to right is the cat with a broom stick which means neat and refining (it is also can related to martial arts), the cat with a bag of rice means bumper harvest, the cat with a snapper means good catch and prosperous business, the cat with a bag means family harmonies, the cat with money means wisdom and fortune, the cat with sandals means health and longevity, the cat with the gavel means fortune and a great prospect. Seven blessings means the life is full of multiple happiness, that is to say a good willings.
It is nice to know that your are interesting with the meanings.
If there is anything I can help please let me know.

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From left to right is the cat with a broom stick which means neat and refining (it is also can related to martial arts), the cat with a bag of rice means bumper harvest, the cat with a snapper means good catch and prosperous business, the cat with a bag means family harmonies, the cat with money means wisdom and fortune, the cat with sandals means health and longevity, the cat with the gavel means fortune and a great prospect. Seven blessings means the life is full of multiple happiness, that is to say a good willings.
It is nice to know that you are interested in the meanings.
If there is anything I can help please let me know.

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１．全部１２本お願いします。そのASIN記されたの１２本を是非三日間配送方法で発送くれしてください。商品は日本からこっちまでの配送料はそんなに安い値段は感謝する。他のUSAセラーより本当に安いです。宜しくお願いします。ボブ
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１．瓶を全部１２個お願いします。ASINに記されている１２個を、三日間速達便の配送方法で発送してください。日本からの発送にも関わらず、配送料の安さに感謝します。他のUSA販売者よりもとても安いです。宜しくお願いします。ボブ
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宜しくお願いします。ボブ
３．メールの返信が無いのは何故でしょうか？私が支払った三日間速達便での１２個の瓶はいつ発送して頂けるのでしょうか？