Natsuko (725_moo) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I'm sorry to being late at sample delivery. I send you the prototype to Taipei today. But I have not confirmed cost and design yet. If you want to type "Kanji" on the package or product name, please tell me. Please give me a little more time.

修正後
I'm sorry for being late at sample delivery. (Being late atというのはちょっと違うかなと思います。→We are sorry for the belated delivery of the sample) We will be shipping you the prototype to Taipei today. But we have not confirmed cost and design yet. If you want to type any "Chinese characters" on the package or product name, please let us know. Please allow us some more time as we are in a hurry.

元の翻訳
The name card should present themselves. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We aspire the design which can feel their persistence to create quality by the name card. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.

修正後
Your business card should be a reflection of your personality. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We aspire the design which can feel their persistence to create quality by the name card. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.

元の翻訳
The name card should present themselves. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We aspire the design which can feel their persistence to create quality by the name card. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.

修正後
The name card should present themselves. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We designed the name card which can show their persistence to quality. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.