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評価: 55 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 2 Reviews / 2014/05/12 17:38:05

725_moo
725_moo 55
日本語

名刺はその人そのものであるべきだと思います。建築設計事務所tsumac design factoryは、彼らの建築・インテリアへの姿勢やその設計・デザインにおいて、他とは明らかに違うクオリティを持っています。そのクオリティを生み出すためのこだわりを、名刺からも感じられるようなデザインを目指しました。紙は極めて厚いグレーの板紙に、職人の技術で刷られる活版印刷。その手作り感やアナログ感は、職人の技を凝縮した、他とは違う存在感や雰囲気を持ったものになりました。

英語

The name card should present themselves. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We aspire the design which can feel their persistence to create quality by the name card. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.

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[削除済みユーザ] 59 Studying Economics and Statistics at ...
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/12 23:18:44

元の翻訳
The name card should present themselves. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We aspire the design which can feel their persistence to create quality by the name card. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.

修正後
The name card should present themselves. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We designed the name card which can show their persistence to quality. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.

725_moo 725_moo 2014/05/13 11:19:37

Thank you so much! It was helpful.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/05/13 09:09:01

元の翻訳
The name card should present themselves. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We aspire the design which can feel their persistence to create quality by the name card. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.

修正後
Your business card should be a reflection of your personality. The architectural office tsumac design factory has distinctly-different quality with others in their attitude for architecture and design. We aspire the design which can feel their persistence to create quality by the name card. The extremely heavy grayish paper with typographical printing by artisan. The handmade feeling and analog feeling with artisan technology make it different from others in presence and atmosphere.

The first sentence does not capture the meaning of the original.

725_moo 725_moo 2014/05/13 11:21:30

Thank you so much!
Your correction was easy to understand.

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