翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

◎スモーカーズ・フェイス(たばこ顔)をご存知ですか…?

喫煙者のお顔に起きる老化をスモーカーズ・フェイスといいます。
数ある大きな特長をざっと、挙げてみますね。
特に女性は必読です。

■白髪・抜け毛が増える
■顔色のくすみ(タールが沈着)
■目尻・口元、ほうれい線等の深いシワ
■しみ・吹き出物が多い(血行障害)
■小鼻の毛穴の開き・黒ずみ
■歯・歯茎の着色汚れ
■唇の乾燥・黒ずみ
■頬骨が目立ち、やつれた表情
■フェイスラインのたるみ
■声帯が傷つき、ガラガラ声(スモーカーズ・ヴォイス)

英語

◯ Do you know a smoker's face (Tobacco bace)？
It is said the face that persons who smoke become smoker face.
We will pick up features roughly.
Specially it is important for women to read.
＊ Increase white hair/hair loss
＊ Facial dullness (tar deposits)
＊ Deep lines at corner of the eyes/around mouth/lines
＊ The wings of a nose's pores open/darkness
＊ Teeth/gum coloring
＊ Dry lips/darkness
＊ Cheekbones stand out, frustrating look
＊ Face lines slack
＊ Vocal cords hurt, ratting voice (smoker's voice)

レビュー ( 1 )

yoppo1026はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2017/01/30 16:10:57

元の翻訳
◯ Do you know a smoker's face (Tobacco bace)？
It is said the face that persons who smoke become smoker face.
We will pick up features roughly.
Specially it is important for women to read.
＊ Increase white hair/hair loss
＊ Facial dullness (tar deposits)
＊ Deep lines at corner of the eyes/around mouth/lines
＊ The wings of a nose's pores open/darkness
＊ Teeth/gum coloring
＊ Dry lips/darkness
＊ Cheekbones stand out, frustrating look
＊ Face lines slack
＊ Vocal cords hurt, ratting voice (smoker's voice)

修正後
◯ Do you know a smoker's face (Tobacco face)?
It is said the face that persons who smoke become smoker face.
We will pick up features roughly.
Specially it is important for women to read.
* Increase white hair/hair loss
* Facial dullness (tar deposits)
*Deep lines at corner of the eyes/around mouth/lines
* The wings of a nose's pores open/darkness
* Teeth/gum coloring
* Dry lips/darkness
* Cheekbones stand out, frustrating look
* Face lines slack
* Vocal cords hurt, ratting voice (smoker's voice)

[setsuko-atarashi]

ありがとう御座いました。