翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2015/02/21 12:53:25

yukoroch807
yukoroch807 52 翻訳の経験はまだ1年もありませんが、米軍関係や外資系の会社に長く勤めていた...
日本語

日本では見掛けた事のないお菓子ばかりで、見ていても楽しかった!1番気に入ったのはチョコレート!甘しょっぱい味で美味しかった!この間、やっとチーズマカロニ食べたよ!あなたに言われた通り、ちょっとトーストして食べたけど気に入った!私チーズ大好きだからペロリと一気に全部食べちゃった…
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英語

There are snacks that I had never seen in Japan. I enjoyed by seeing them! The one I liked most was chocolate. It had sweet-and-sour taste and good! Recently, I finally ate macaroni & cheese! As you told me, I toasted it a little bit, and I liked it! Since I love cheese, I ate them up... I put the picture you drew in my work desk. I feel comforted by seeing it when I am under stress and frustrated. You who are kind, I hope I see you and talk to you some day. Have you showed your picture?

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[削除済みユーザ] 44
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/02/22 12:58:11

元の翻訳
There are snacks that I had never seen in Japan. I enjoyed by seeing them! The one I liked most was chocolate. It had sweet-and-sour taste and good! Recently, I finally ate macaroni & cheese! As you told me, I toasted it a little bit, and I liked it! Since I love cheese, I ate them up... I put the picture you drew in my work desk. I feel comforted by seeing it when I am under stress and frustrated. You who are kind, I hope I see you and talk to you some day. Have you showed your picture?

修正後
There were snacks I had never seen in Japan. I enjoyed seeing them! The one I liked most was chocolate. It had a sweet-and-sour taste and was delicious! The other day I finally ate macaroni & cheese! As you told me, I toasted it a little bit, and I liked it! Since I love cheese, I ate them up... I put the picture you drew on my work desk. I feel comforted by seeing it when I am under stress and frustrated. You are kind. I hope to see you and talk to you someday. Have you showed your picture [unclear]?

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