翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: Ａ/私が販売しているシャープペンには最初から芯が入っているのか訊かれたので入っていることを伝えたいです。
Ｂ/ネットショップの更新のお知らせに使いたい文章です。

日本語

Ａ.このシャープペンにはあらかじめ芯は入っています。また、市販されている一般的な芯をお使いいただけます。
B.今日は●●のヴィンテージアイテムを多数お店にアップしました。箱に切り抜きがあるものが多いですが、中身はとても綺麗な状態のものが多く、おすすめです。お値段も安めに設定しています。

英語

A. This sharp pen is equipped with lead. Moreover, you can use leads that are generally available in the market.
B. The vintage items of OO were uploaded in a lot of stores today. Although there are cuts on the boxes, there are a lot of items which contain contents in extremely good conditions so I am recommending it. The price is also very cheap.

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/19 10:05:58

元の翻訳
A. This sharp pen is equipped with lead. Moreover, you can use leads that are generally available in the market.
B. The vintage items of OO were uploaded in a lot of stores today. Although there are cuts on the boxes, there are a lot of items which contain contents in extremely good conditions so I am recommending it. The price is also very cheap.

修正後
A. This mechanical pencil is equipped with lead. Moreover, you can use leads that are generally available in the market.
B. The vintage items of OO were uploaded in a lot of stores today. Although there are cuts on the boxes, there are a lot of items which contain contents in extremely good conditions so I am recommending it. The price is also very cheap.

シャープペンis Japanese English. Japanese have a lot of Japanese English, so it's better to be careful when translating Japanese into English.