翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

この間、靴を購入しました。デザインをすごく気に入っています。しかし靴のサイズが大きかったので、交換してください。
こちらのUS１０を購入しましたが、US９に交換してください。

英語

I purchased a pair of shoes from you the other day. I love the design of it. But this one is too large for me, so could you replace it?
I bought a size US 10 of it, please replace it with US 9.

レビュー ( 1 )

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/19 13:27:29

元の翻訳
I purchased a pair of shoes from you the other day. I love the design of it. But this one is too large for me, so could you replace it?
I bought a size US 10 of it, please replace it with US 9.

修正後
I purchased a pair of shoes from you the other day. I love the design of it. But this pair is too large for me, so could I exchange it?
I bought a size US 10, so please exchange it with US 9.

Good job, a bit tricky dealing with 'pair' and using singular