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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/12/11 15:43:21

sujiko
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日本語

上記の手順があなたが指示した方法ですよね?

Order # 75に関しても、Order # 28が届かなかったために再注文しました。
このラグも12月15日までに到着するようベンダーに依頼して下さい。

とにかく、私としては未到着分の以下ラグを12月15日までに必ず届けて欲しいのです。

Order #: 25は12月4日、Order # 28は11月20に注文しています。
私は長い期間、商品到着を待っています。
この状況をご理解いただき、早急に対応して下さい。




英語

The proceedure above is a way that you instructed, isn't it?

Regarding the Order number 75, as I have not received the Order number 28,
I ordered again.
I ask you to request a vendor that I can receive this rug by December 15th.

I would like to receive all the following rugs that I have not received by December 15th.

I ordered the Order number 25 on December 4th and the Order number 28 on November 20th.
I have been waiting for them for a long time.
I appreciate your understanding, and please work on it immediately.

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mayustardustはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/12/12 20:55:07

元の翻訳
The proceedure above is a way that you instructed, isn't it?

Regarding the Order number 75, as I have not received the Order number 28,
I ordered again.
I ask you to request a vendor that I can receive this rug by December 15th.

I would like to receive all the following rugs that I have not received by December 15th.

I ordered the Order number 25 on December 4th and the Order number 28 on November 20th.
I have been waiting for them for a long time.
I appreciate your understanding, and please work on it immediately.

修正後
The procedure above is the way that you instructed, isn't it?

Regarding the Order number 75, as I have not received the Order number 28,
I ordered again.
I ask you to request the vendor that I can receive this rug by December 15th.

I would like to receive all the following rugs that I have not received by December 15th.

I ordered the Order number 25 on December 4th and the Order number 28 on November 20th.
I have been waiting for them for a long time.
I appreciate your understanding, and please work on it immediately.

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