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日本語

モデルの杉山由紀子さんがこの秋冬おすすめのグリーンを使った秋冬メイクメイクをしてくました！
ポイントとなるアイメイクはベースカラーの塗り方、色の重ね方、筆使いなど参考になるポイントがたくさん。

英語

Model, Yukiko Sugiyama is going to recommend makeup of the season that using green color this fall and winter!

Eye makeup will be the key point includes the way of completing the foundation, the combination of colors, using of brush strokes and many things are worth to note.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/11/24 13:16:47

元の翻訳
Model, Yukiko Sugiyama is going to recommend makeup of the season that using green color this fall and winter!

Eye makeup will be the key point includes the way of completing the foundation, the combination of colors, using of brush strokes and many things are worth to note.

修正後
Model Yukiko Sugiyama is going to [tense confusion] recommend makeup of the season using the green color this fall and winter!

Eye makeup will be [tense confusion] the key point, including the way of completing the foundation, the combination of colors, using of brush strokes and many things worth noting.