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日本語

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英語

I sent you a message, but haven't received a reply and I wonder if you have read it. I apologize if there was anything that made you upset in my email.

Today I'm writing to tell you an important thing, so I'd like you to take a look.

After the test marketing, we found a better sales route that could sell your products more. We expect that if you and we work together, we both would get quite a lot of profit.

I'd like to discuss about with you in person, so why don't we talk on Skype?
If it's okay with you, could you tell me your Skype ID please?

I'd appreciate if you could tell when you are available, too. Could you list up your best three days and time please?

Thank you.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/21 01:15:48

元の翻訳
I sent you a message, but haven't received a reply and I wonder if you have read it. I apologize if there was anything that made you upset in my email.

Today I'm writing to tell you an important thing, so I'd like you to take a look.

After the test marketing, we found a better sales route that could sell your products more. We expect that if you and we work together, we both would get quite a lot of profit.

I'd like to discuss about with you in person, so why don't we talk on Skype?
If it's okay with you, could you tell me your Skype ID please?

I'd appreciate if you could tell when you are available, too. Could you list up your best three days and time please?

Thank you.

修正後
I sent you a message, but haven't received a reply and I wonder if you have read it. I apologize if there was anything that made you upset in my email.

Today I'm writing to tell you an important thing, so I'd like you to take a look.

After the test marketing, we found a better sales route that could sell your products more. We expect that if you and we work together, we both would get quite a lot of profit.

I'd like to discuss with you in person, so why don't we talk on Skype?
If it's okay with you, could you tell me your Skype ID, please?

I'd appreciate it if you could tell when you are available, too. Could you list up your best three days and time, please?

Thank you.

[mechamami]

有り難うございます。