翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

途中にいる黒い人達はどうでもいい人達です。
当たると黒い球体の速度は落ちます。
進路上にいるため確実に当たるので、それを見越した速度で挑戦しましょう。

上手い具合にギリギリで止まれると嬉しいですね。
でも、沢山の黒い人達は犠牲になります。
一人のワガママの為に、犠牲になります。

英語

You don't need to worry about the black people
who on on the way.
If you touch them, it makes the speed of the black glove slower,
They are on your way, so you will definitely touch then.
so you will need to go ahead with prevenient speed.

It will be nice if you can stop just before touching them.
However, lots of black people will become victimized.
Because of only one person's selfish act, they will be victimized.

レビュー ( 1 )

mooominはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/18 08:09:18

元の翻訳
You don't need to worry about the black people
who on on the way.
If you touch them, it makes the speed of the black glove slower,
They are on your way, so you will definitely touch then.
so you will need to go ahead with prevenient speed.

It will be nice if you can stop just before touching them.
However, lots of black people will become victimized.
Because of only one person's selfish act, they will be victimized.

修正後
You don't need to worry about the black people
whom you will meet on your way.
If you touch them, it makes the speed of the black globe slower,
They are in your way, so you will definitely touch them.
Therefore you will need to go ahead with prevenient speed.

It will be nice if you can stop just before touching them.
However, lots of black people will become victimized.
Because of only one person's selfish act, they will be victimized.

black peopleはpeople in blackの方が良いかなとも思いました。

[honeylemon003]

ご指摘の通りだと思います。評価とコメントどうもありがとうございました。