翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

48.
叶わないことを夢と称するなら　僕は僕の夢を壊してみせるよ。

47.
なりたい自分がいるから　　まだ　　越えられる。

46.
君の自由を奪いたいわけじゃないんだ。
それでも無性に箱の中に
ううん。いっそ僕の中に　閉じ込めてしまいたくなるんだよ。

41.
向き合うことから逃げていた。
自分の弱さなんて知りたくなかった。

僕の壁はいつだって　僕自身だった。

英語

48.
If I dream of things that do not come true, I will destroy my dream.

47.
Since there is oneself that I want to be, I still go on.

46.
I do not want to take your freedom.
Still so badly in a box
No. ..I want to shut it in me rather

41.
I was running away from confrontation.
I did not want to acknowledge my own weakness.

My obstacle was myself.

レビュー ( 1 )

jumotはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/21 21:34:30

元の翻訳
48.
If I dream of things that do not come true, I will destroy my dream.

47.
Since there is oneself that I want to be, I still go on.

46.
I do not want to take your freedom.
Still so badly in a box
No. ..I want to shut it in me rather

41.
I was running away from confrontation.
I did not want to acknowledge my own weakness.

My obstacle was myself.

修正後
48.
If I dream impossible things, I will destroy my dream.

47.
Since there is oneself that I want to be, I still go on.

46.
I do not want to take your freedom.
Still so badly in a box
No. ..I want to shut it inside of me rather

41.
I was running away from confrontation.
I did not want to acknowledge my own weakness.

My obstacle was always myself.

これで多少わかりやすなったっと思います。

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