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日本語

no78801

日本の活火山８撰・・・火山の恵みにあずかろう

日本は火山列島で多くの火山があります。火山の中でも活火山は火山活動が活発なものも多くあり、その恩恵をこの国の人々は多く受けています。一番の恩恵は火山の近くにある温泉と豊かな自然環境だと思います。

大雪山（北海道）

大雪山は北海道の代表的な観光地で多くの人々が訪れています。
大雪山のふもとには層雲峡温泉が待っています。

有珠山（北海道）

有珠山は活動が活発で大きな噴火がくり返し起きています。

英語

no78801

8 selected Japanese active volcanos・・・Let's see how beneficial they are.

There are many volcanos in Japan because Japan is a country of Volcano islands.
In those volcanos, some are active and they bring many benefits to the Japanese,
The most beneficial things could be hot springs neayby volcanos and rich nature surrounding there.

Mount. Taisetsu (Hokkaidou)

Mount.Taisetsu is one of the major tourist spots with many visitors in Hokkaido.
There are hot springs called "Souunkyo" sitting at the foot of Mount. Taisetsu.

Mount. Usu (Hokkaidou)

Mount. Usu is an active volcano and repeatedly erupts extensively.

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jumotはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/21 21:46:35

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no78801

8 selected Japanese active volcanos・・・Let's see how beneficial they are.

There are many volcanos in Japan because Japan is a country of Volcano islands.
In those volcanos, some are active and they bring many benefits to the Japanese,
The most beneficial things could be hot springs neayby volcanos and rich nature surrounding there.

Mount. Taisetsu (Hokkaidou)

Mount.Taisetsu is one of the major tourist spots with many visitors in Hokkaido.
There are hot springs called "Souunkyo" sitting at the foot of Mount. Taisetsu.

Mount. Usu (Hokkaidou)

Mount. Usu is an active volcano and repeatedly erupts extensively.

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no78801

8 choices of Japanese active volcanos・・・Let's see how beneficial they are.

There are many volcanos in Japan because Japan is a country of Volcano islands.
In those volcanos, some are active and they bring many benefits to the Japanese,
The most beneficial things could be hot springs neayby volcanos and rich nature surrounding there.

Mount. Taisetsu (Hokkaidou)

Mount.Taisetsu is one of the major tourist spots with many visitors in Hokkaido.
There are hot springs called "Souunkyo" sitting at the foot of Mount. Taisetsu.

Mount. Usu (Hokkaidou)

Mount. Usu is an active volcano and repeatedly erupts extensively.

いいと思います。

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