翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

①昨日ヒーターを受け取りました。
早速、車で使用してみました。すると、1分程で急に動かなくなりました。異常な電圧がかかったためか私の車のシガーソケットが壊れてしまいました。
私の車のシガーソケットについてはヒューズを交換するなどして治してみますが、商品についてはどういった対応をしていただけるのでしょうか？私は返金を望みます

②荷物を送る際には支払人の田中健太宛ではなく、吉田ゆり子宛に送っていただけますか？
➂どんな発送方法でもかまいませんので、安く、早く着く方法で日本に送って下さい

英語

①I received the heater yesterday.
I tried to use it in my car right now. Then it didn't work suddenly in about one minute. I guess that the cigarette lighter socket in my car was broken because of excess voltage.
I will try to repair the cigarette lighter socket in my car by exchanging the fuse, and so on. However I would like you to ask how you cope with this item. I hope your repayment.

②Could you send the parcels not for Tanaka Kenta who paid for them, but for Yoshida Yuriko?
③I don't care about the any way you send them, so send them to Japan in a cheaper and faster way.

レビュー ( 1 )

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/18 11:50:53

元の翻訳
①I received the heater yesterday.
I tried to use it in my car right now. Then it didn't work suddenly in about one minute. I guess that the cigarette lighter socket in my car was broken because of excess voltage.
I will try to repair the cigarette lighter socket in my car by exchanging the fuse, and so on. However I would like you to ask how you cope with this item. I hope your repayment.

②Could you send the parcels not for Tanaka Kenta who paid for them, but for Yoshida Yuriko?
③I don't care about the any way you send them, so send them to Japan in a cheaper and faster way.

修正後
①I received the heater yesterday.
I tried to use it in my car right away. Then it suddenly stopped working after about one minute. Maybe it was due to excess voltage but the cigarette lighter socket in my car is now broken.
I will try to repair the cigarette lighter socket in my car by exchanging the fuse. However I would like you to ask how you plan to respond regarding this item. I hope for a refund.

②Could you send the parcels not to Tanaka Kenta who paid for them, but to Yoshida Yuriko?
③I don't mind how you send them, so please send them to Japan in a cheaper and faster way.

Not bad but some things to look at

[hayatooooooo]

添削ありがとうございます。よりよい表現にしていただき、とても参考になりました。