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yasujazz
yasujazz 58 翻訳勉強中のおじさんです。 TOEIC945点です。 プロの翻訳家を目...
日本語

1962年に京橋〜芝浦の間で完成したのをかわきりに、64年に行われる東京オリンピックにあわせて羽田空港まで完成させた。新幹線もオリンピック開催10日前の10月1日に開業。どちらも戦後からの復興の象徴になった。その現在の高速道路を夜撮影をした。肉眼で見るよりフィルムを通して見る方が格段に美しく子どもの頃に見たSFマンガが現実になったと感じる。
スナップショット
「人物などの瞬間的な動作や表情をすばやく撮影した写真。早撮り写真。スナップ。スナップショット。」大辞林より

英語

After the Kyobashi-Shibaura route was completed in 1962, it was extended to the Haneda Airport in time for Tokyo Olympics in 1964. The Shinkansen, the bullet train, started its service on October 1st, just ten days ahead of the opening ceremony. Both of them were looked as a symbol of the recovery from the World War 2. The photo of the highway at night can be seen here as of now. It looks far more beautiful on film than the real thing and seems like Si-Fi comics we read in childhood come true.
Snapshot:"A quickly-taken photograph of an instantaneous action or expression in people and others. A snap." Taken from Daijirin, Japanese Dictionary.




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元の翻訳
After the Kyobashi-Shibaura route was completed in 1962, it was extended to the Haneda Airport in time for Tokyo Olympics in 1964. The Shinkansen, the bullet train, started its service on October 1st, just ten days ahead of the opening ceremony. Both of them were looked as a symbol of the recovery from the World War 2. The photo of the highway at night can be seen here as of now. It looks far more beautiful on film than the real thing and seems like Si-Fi comics we read in childhood come true.
Snapshot:"A quickly-taken photograph of an instantaneous action or expression in people and others. A snap." Taken from Daijirin, Japanese Dictionary.




修正後
After the Kyobashi-Shibaura route was completed in 1962, it was extended to Haneda Airport in time for the Tokyo Olympics in 1964. The Shinkansen, the bullet train, started its service on October 1st, just ten days ahead of the opening ceremony. Both of them were looked as symbols of the recovery from World War II. The photo of the highway at night can be seen here as of now. It looks far more beautiful on film than the real thing and seems like Sci-fi comics we read in childhood come true.
Snapshot: "A quickly-taken photograph of an instantaneous action or expression in people and others. A snap." Taken from the Daijirin Japanese dictionary.




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