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評価: 50 / ネイティブ ポルトガル語 (ブラジル) / 1 Review / 2014/01/25 02:38:58

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jumot 50 2007年に日本語能力試験一級合格。
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tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/25 12:28:55

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「~の確認」の「の」は「of」ではなく「on」が正しいです。

このレビューを100%の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。

jumot jumot 2014/01/25 22:35:39

レビューありがとうございます。訂正ありがとうございます。いつも勘違いするところです。

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