翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

こんにちは

注文の荷物が届きました。
ありがとう。

また、注文するかもしれません。
その時はよろしくお願いします。

英語

Hello.

I received a package that I had ordered.
Thank you.

I might order again.
On that occasion, I hope you will send to me again.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/22 09:51:29

元の翻訳
Hello.

I received a package that I had ordered.
Thank you.

I might order again.
On that occasion, I hope you will send to me again.

修正後
Hello.

I received a package that I had ordered [tense?].
Thank you.

I might order again.
On that occasion, I hope you will send to me again [send what?].