翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 44 / 1 Review / 2013/11/28 21:22:49

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日本語

私はあなたの期待を実現できなかったことを残念に思います。
私は悪意があったのではなく実際にそう見えました。
ミントではなくエクセレントコンディションですから多少のチリの混入はあります。
梱包には最前の注意を払ったつもりでしたがクッションが足りなかったことには気づきませんでした。
不愉快な思いをさせてしまったことをお詫びします。

英語

It's unfortunate that I couldn't meet your expectations.
I had no bad intentions, but I thought I was describing the product accurately.
As it's excellent, not mint condition, it contains some dust.
I thought I packed it with the utmost care, but I didn't realize it needed some cushion.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

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huuhung 45 初めまして、ベトナム語ー日本語/英語翻訳者のKhanh(カン)と申します。...
huuhungはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/29 00:10:23

元の翻訳
It's unfortunate that I couldn't meet your expectations.
I had no bad intentions, but I thought I was describing the product accurately.
As it's excellent, not mint condition, it contains some dust.
I thought I packed it with the utmost care, but I didn't realize it needed some cushion.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

修正後
It's unfortunate that I couldn't meet your expectations.
I had no bad intentions, but I thought I was describing the product accurately.
As it's excellent, not mint condition, it contains some dust.
I thought I packed it with the utmost care, but I didn't realize that the cushion was not enough
I apologize for the inconvenience.

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