翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 49 / 1 Review / 2013/10/25 17:13:53

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日本語

中野駅にはたまに来てたんだね。どこかですれ違っていたら面白いね!

あの地震は本当にこわかった。
私の住んでいる付近は、確かに埋め立て地で、液状化に苦しんだけど
私の家の下は、昔…島だったらしく、埋め立て地ではなかったの。
だから大丈夫だったよ。心配してくれてありがとう。

東京では渋谷、恵比寿、新宿、六本木…付近で遊んでます。
友達と飲んだり、カラオケ、ダーツしたり、英語の勉強がてら六本木に行って
バーでアメリカの人とお話します。英語が不慣れだから
相手を知らないで話しているから少し怖い 


英語

You visited at Nakano station sometimes. It would be fun if I pass you on the road!
I was really scared by that earthquake. The area I live is the landfill area so I suffered from liquefaction but I heard that the land under my house was the island, not the landfill area.
So I was safe. There is no need to worry.
I divert myself in Tokyo area such as Shibuya, Ebisu, Shinjuku and Roppongi.
I go for drink, go to Karaoke, play darts with my friends. I go to bars in Roppongi to study English by chatting with Americans. As I am not good at speaking English, I am bit scared to speak with people I don’t know.

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sl_translatorはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/26 01:14:51

元の翻訳
You visited at Nakano station sometimes. It would be fun if I pass you on the road!
I was really scared by that earthquake. The area I live is the landfill area so I suffered from liquefaction but I heard that the land under my house was the island, not the landfill area.
So I was safe. There is no need to worry.
I divert myself in Tokyo area such as Shibuya, Ebisu, Shinjuku and Roppongi.
I go for drink, go to Karaoke, play darts with my friends. I go to bars in Roppongi to study English by chatting with Americans. As I am not good at speaking English, I am bit scared to speak with people I don’t know.

修正後
You visited Nakano station often. It would be funny if we were passing each other somewhere without noticing it!
I was really scared by that earthquake. The area where I live is the landfill area so I suffered from liquefaction but apparently the the land under my house was the island, not the landfill area.
So I was safe. There is no need to worry.
I divert myself in Tokyo area such as Shibuya, Ebisu, Shinjuku and Roppongi.
I go for a drink, go to Karaoke, play darts with my friends. I go to bars in Roppongi to study English by chatting with Americans. As I'm an inexperienced English speaker, I am bit scared to speak with someone I don't know.

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