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評価: 66 / 1 Review / 2013/10/12 23:28:44

ayaka_maruyama
ayaka_maruyama 66 ・Graduated from Keio University, Degr...
日本語

赤ちゃんは好奇心旺盛。
赤ちゃんがいじりたがる、身の回りの実用品そっくりなアイテムが大集合したおもちゃです。

「やみつきボックスII」は、簡単で知育性の高い遊びが16種類!多彩な感動アクションでお子様の好奇心を刺激します。
・ひっぱりレシートでひっぱる感覚を。
・びょーんと飛び出すフルーツやシーソーボタン。
・楽しい蛇口遊び。
・セットボタンとパチンコ玉とばしでも遊べます。
・上部のボタンを押すとピカピカ光ります。
・星型のボタンを押すとメロディが流れます(8曲)。

英語

Babies are brimming with curiosity.
This is a toy that assembled things that are made to look exactly like what babies love to touch in the house.

[Addictive box II] is packed with 16 easy and educational toys that arouses the curiosity of babies with multiple emotional actions.
・Get the pulling action of receipts through the cash machine
・A pop-up action of fruits and seesaw buttons
・Play with the fun water taps
・Play with the set button and ping pong balls
・The upper button makes the lights flash
・The star-shaped button makes melodies (8 songs included)

レビュー ( 1 )

agnesc 59
agnescはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/12 23:39:43

元の翻訳
Babies are brimming with curiosity.
This is a toy that assembled things that are made to look exactly like what babies love to touch in the house.

[Addictive box II] is packed with 16 easy and educational toys that arouses the curiosity of babies with multiple emotional actions.
・Get the pulling action of receipts through the cash machine
・A pop-up action of fruits and seesaw buttons
・Play with the fun water taps
・Play with the set button and ping pong balls
・The upper button makes the lights flash
・The star-shaped button makes melodies (8 songs included)

修正後
Babies are brimming with curiosity.
This is a toy that assembled things that are made to look exactly like what babies love to touch in the house.

[Addictive box II] is packed with 16 easy and educational toys that arouses the curiosity of babies with multiple emotional actions.
・Get the pulling action of receipts through the cash machine
・A pop-up action of fruits and seesaw buttons
・Play with the fun water taps
・Play with the set button which launches ping pong balls
・The upper button makes the lights flash
・The star-shaped button plays melodies (8 songs included)

Great! Sounds very natural.

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