翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/08/17 14:47:26

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sujiko 50 IT、金融などを中心として社内翻訳者を数年経験後、フリーランス翻訳者として...
日本語

本品は美しく健康的に、ハードな運動を必要とせず、ほぼ空腹感を感じることなく短期間でダイエットしたいあなたに最適です。
さらに血糖値が気になる方へもお勧めできます。食べ物を食べて血糖値が上がると、血糖値を正常化させようとインスリンが分泌され、血糖値が下がります。しかし、肥満になるとインスリンの分泌が悪くなり、血液中の血糖値が下がりにくくなってしまいます。 すると、血液中の糖分は中性脂肪に変換されやすくなり、さらに肥満に拍車がかかってきます。

英語

This product is the best for you who want to go on a diet for a short time almost without feeling hunger and doing hard exercise beautifully and healthily.

I can recommend this for those who are concerned about blood glucose level. Upon eating, if blood glucose level goes up, insulin which normalizes the blood glucose level is secreted and blood glucose level goes down. However, if you become fat, it is difficult to secrete insulin and the blood glucose level in blood is difficult to go down. As a result, sugar in the blood is easy to be converted to neutral fat, and people tend to become fatter.

レビュー ( 1 )

blackdiamondはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/17 16:34:18

元の翻訳
This product is the best for you who want to go on a diet for a short time almost without feeling hunger and doing hard exercise beautifully and healthily.

I can recommend this for those who are concerned about blood glucose level. Upon eating, if blood glucose level goes up, insulin which normalizes the blood glucose level is secreted and blood glucose level goes down. However, if you become fat, it is difficult to secrete insulin and the blood glucose level in blood is difficult to go down. As a result, sugar in the blood is easy to be converted to neutral fat, and people tend to become fatter.

修正後
This product is the best for you who want to go on a diet beautifully and healthily for a short time almost without feeling hunger and doing hard exercise.

I can recommend this for those who are concerned about blood glucose level. Upon eating, if blood glucose level goes up, insulin which normalizes the blood glucose level is secreted and blood glucose level goes down. However, if you become fat, it is difficult to secrete insulin and the blood glucose level in blood is difficult to go down. As a result, sugar in the blood is easy to be converted to neutral fat, and people tend to become fatter.

この位置のほうがよりわかりやすい気がしました。

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