翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

おはよう。
昨日の英語パーティはどうだった？
今朝、お守り送りました。
デザインの仕事や、いつまでも挑戦し続ける貴方の夢が叶うよう、お願いしてきたので、使ってね。

それと、
仕事で立ち寄った、雑貨屋さんでカンボジアでの仕事の見本に持って行こうと思って買った可愛いハンカチがあったので、同封してます。袋に入っていないけど、間違いないので、使ってね！！

いよいよ明日から単身でシンガポール・カンボジアに入ります。寂しくなるので、暇なときは連絡下さい。貴方のメールが一番勇気づけられます！！

英語

Dear" Your friend's Name"

Good morning!
How was the English party last night? Was it fun?
I sent a charm this morning.
I hope success in your design business and the dream of you trying forever for it.

And,
I bought and attached the handkerchief I saw in a grocer that I want to show you as a sample of the job in cambodia.
It isn't wrapped but I assure you it is really good. please use it surely !

then,
I will go to Singapore and Cambodia alone. Please send me e-mails because I might feel lonely.
Your mail is the best to encourage me !!

Sincerely, "Your Name"

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/28 21:52:29

元の翻訳
Dear" Your friend's Name"

Good morning!
How was the English party last night? Was it fun?
I sent a charm this morning.
I hope success in your design business and the dream of you trying forever for it.

And,↵
I bought and attached the handkerchief I saw in a grocer that I want to show you as a sample of the job in cambodia.
It isn't wrapped but I assure you it is really good. please use it surely !

then,↵
I will go to Singapore and Cambodia alone. Please send me e-mails because I might feel lonely.
Your mail is the best to encourage me !!

Sincerely, "Your Name"

修正後
Dear" Your friend's Name"

Good morning!
How was the English party last night? Was it fun?
I sent you an amulet this morning.
I hope success in your design business and the dream of you trying forever for it [awkward].

I bought and attached [word choice] a handkerchief I saw in a general store that I want to show you as a sample of the job (?) in Cambodia.
It isn't wrapped, but I assure you it is really good [word choice]. Please use it!

I will go to Singapore and Cambodia alone. Please send me e-mails because I might feel lonely.
Your mail is the best to encourage me [awkward]!!

Sincerely, "Your Name"