翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

日本ではスケボーを楽しむ若者は多く、大会なども盛んに行われています。

一方で、日本は国土が大変狭い為、車も自転車も家もコンパクトなものが好まれる傾向にあります。

それなのに、折り畳み可能なスケボーは、これまで日本には一切ありませんでした。スケボーをコンパクトに収納できたら良いのにと思っている日本人は必ずいます！
貴方達の開発したこのスケボーは、日本人の心を掴むことができると私達は信じています。

専用のバックパックまで揃っており完璧です。見た瞬間に『コレだ！』と思いました。

英語

A lot of young people in Japan enjoy skateboarding, and tournaments, etc. attract big crowds.

On the other hand, the country of Japan is very small and narrow, so there is a tendency to prefer compact cars, bicycles, and homes.

Despite this, there have been absolutely no folding skateboards in Japan to date. There are certainly Japanese people who think it would be good to be able to compactly put away a skateboard.
We believe the skateboards you've developed can appeal to Japanese people.

It's a complete package together with the specialized backpack. When people see it they'll immediately think "this is something I've been looking for!"

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/16 14:27:20

元の翻訳
A lot of young people in Japan enjoy skateboarding, and tournaments, etc. attract big crowds.

On the other hand, the country of Japan is very small and narrow, so there is a tendency to prefer compact cars, bicycles, and homes.

Despite this, there have been absolutely no folding skateboards in Japan to date. There are certainly Japanese people who think it would be good to be able to compactly put away a skateboard.
We believe the skateboards you've developed can appeal to Japanese people.

It's a complete package together with the specialized backpack. When people see it they'll immediately think "this is something I've been looking for!"

修正後
A lot of young people in Japan enjoy skateboarding, and tournaments, etc. attract big crowds.

On the other hand, Japan is very small and narrow, so there is a tendency to prefer compact cars, bicycles, and homes.

Despite this, there have been absolutely no folding skateboards in Japan to date. There are certainly Japanese people who think it would be good to be able to compactly put away a skateboard.
We believe the skateboards you've developed can appeal to Japanese people.

It's a complete package together with the specialized backpack. When I saw it, I thought to myself immediately: "This is something I've been looking for!"

[tokyomanly]

添削はどうも有り難う御座いました。勉強になりました。