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rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 11 Jul 2013 at 21:34
original ご注文の靴を全て一つにまとめてはいかがでしょうか。それでしたら郵送料がかなり安価になります。ご注文の靴は全て在庫がございますので、決済をお願い致します。	corrected お求めの靴をまとめて注文されてはいかがでしょうか。それでしたら郵送料がかなり安くなります。ご注文の靴は全て在庫がございますので、今すぐ決済できます。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2013 at 21:09
original HI guys, it's been a long time! I'm Hanako, one of the members! The summer has come without doubt, hasn't it! I have watched quite a few first episodes of anime this summer, and I liked ◯◯ best as you can guess. It's a must-see! ●● was of course amusing, but ◯◯ was better than I had expected! Though the characters are so good-looking, they are really muscular in their swimsuits! I haven't seen that realistic muscles in an anime in a long time... I like Haruka, the main character and her junior, Nagisa especially! I was fascinated with Haruka's cool nature and Nagisa's adorable actions...!	corrected HI guys, it's been a long time! I'm Hanako, one of the members! The summer has come without a doubt, hasn't it! I have watched quite a few first episodes of anime this summer, and I liked ◯◯ best as you can guess. It's a must-see! ●● was of course amusing, but ◯◯ was better than I had expected! Not only are the characters so good-looking but they are also really muscular in their swimsuits! I haven't seen that realistic muscles in an anime in a long time... I like Haruka, the main character, and her junior, Nagisa, especially! I was fascinated with Haruka's cool nature and Nagisa's adorable actions...!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

22 Jul 2013 at 21:09

original
HI guys, it's been a long time! I'm Hanako, one of the members!
The summer has come without doubt, hasn't it!

I have watched quite a few first episodes of anime this summer, and I liked ◯◯ best as you can guess. It's a must-see!

●● was of course amusing, but ◯◯ was better than I had expected!

Though the characters are so good-looking, they are really muscular in their swimsuits! I haven't seen that realistic muscles in an anime in a long time...

I like Haruka, the main character and her junior, Nagisa especially!

I was fascinated with Haruka's cool nature and Nagisa's adorable actions...!

corrected
HI guys, it's been a long time! I'm Hanako, one of the members!
The summer has come without a doubt, hasn't it!

I have watched quite a few first episodes of anime this summer, and I liked ◯◯ best as you can guess. It's a must-see!

●● was of course amusing, but ◯◯ was better than I had expected!

Not only are the characters so good-looking but they are also really muscular in their swimsuits! I haven't seen that realistic muscles in an anime in a long time...

I like Haruka, the main character, and her junior, Nagisa, especially!

I was fascinated with Haruka's cool nature and Nagisa's adorable actions...!

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