Kouichi (taichi555) — Received Reviews

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About 11 years ago

Japan

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rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 25 May 2013 at 02:20
Comment It's a little hard to understand because it was translated too literally.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 24 May 2013 at 11:54
Comment succeeds -> will succeed the hope contents -> what you need/want/hope for

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 24 May 2013 at 11:58
Comment a product is sent -> the product(s) will be sent all the products of non-shipment -> all the products that have not shipped you fill al...

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 27 May 2013 at 17:41
Comment Does not make sense at all.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 14 Feb 2014 at 21:38
original I think that I can secure a brand name (red) four.However,It is around May 29 that the product which I secured arrives at our store.I send it at international shipments within one ↵ ↵ day if I arrive at our store.It should arrive around June 4 at Australia. The condition is I send out two boxes in a mass,shipping Free (EMS),One rate is 335USD. according to the content that I conveyed before. I send an invoice if you do not have any problem in the condition, schedule mentioned above. Please consider.	corrected I think that I can secure 4 brand names (red) . However, It will be around May 29 when those products arrive at our store. I will send them by international mail within one day as soon as they arrive at our store. They should arrive around June 4 at Australia. As I told you before, the condition is two boxes in a mass, shipping Free (EMS), and 335USD per product. Please pay by AUD. I will send an invoice if you do not have any problem with the condition and schedule mentioned above. Please consider.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

14 Feb 2014 at 21:38

original
I think that I can secure a brand name (red) four.However,It is around May 29 that the product which I secured arrives at our store.I send it at international shipments within one ↵
↵
day if I arrive at our store.It should arrive around June 4 at Australia.

The condition is I send out two boxes in a mass,shipping Free (EMS),One rate is 335USD. according to the content that I conveyed before.

I send an invoice if you do not have any problem in the condition, schedule mentioned above.

Please consider.

corrected
I think that I can secure 4 brand names (red) . However, It will be around May 29 when those products arrive at our store. I will send them by international mail within one day as soon as they arrive at our store. They should arrive around June 4 at Australia.

As I told you before, the condition is two boxes in a mass, shipping Free (EMS), and 335USD per product. Please pay by AUD.

I will send an invoice if you do not have any problem with the condition and schedule mentioned above.

Please consider.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 12 Feb 2014 at 15:07
original I am Miyajima of Kotori media.Thank you for a second inquiry. This version (ASIN: of "***" The DVD is not attached to B001AAZ4GO).It is an entering 17 pieces album version only for CDs.	corrected I am Miyajima of Kotori Media. Thank you for your inquiry again. This version of "***" (ASIN: B001AAZ4GO) has no DVD attached. It is an album version only for CDs with 17 pieces.

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 23 May 2013 at 16:04
Comment １行目→修飾語の羅列が長いので、文章が冗長になり若干読みにくいように思います。２行目→「１人の人は死ぬと報告され～負傷しました」は日本語表現として不自然に思います。そしてここでのthe stateは「州」です。「州全体で１人が死亡、少なくとも２１人が負傷しました」など、...

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 23 May 2013 at 15:55
Comment 文章がやや不自然に感じます。もっと自然な日本語になるように工夫を！

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