sykstt (sayaka_sato) — Received Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 16 Jun 2015 at 03:22
original 我々はモックアップ、テスト駆動開発（TDD）、結合テストを組み合わせてサンプルアプリを開発していきます。第3章の静的サイトの作成から開始し、動的コンテンツを少しずつ生成していきます。	corrected モックアップ作製、テスト駆動開発（TDD）、および統合テストを組み合わせてサンプルアプリを開発していきます。第3章では静的サイトの制作から開始し、その後動的コンテンツを少し追加していきます。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 07 Jul 2014 at 15:52
original 25 year old part timer, Ms. Aimi Tachiyama's " Before and After Theme" is "Natural cute look with light, summer color and short bangs". Before, she had no layers but had thick, heavy, bulky look. First, we started with giving layers in the surface to define and create movements in the hair. The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression. We've highlighted above the ears with orange-brown color for light and casual look. Applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch. We have turned her dry, thin, long hair into something different by controlling the inner volume of the hair and making her head look small.	corrected Ms. Aimi Tachiyama, the 25 year old part timer, sets the theme for " Before and After" as a 'natural and cute look with light color and short bangs for the summer.' She had no layers and had a bulky look. We started with giving layers on the surface to create movements in the hair. The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression. We also highlighted hair above ears with orange-brown color for a light and casual look. Finally, we applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch. She used to have dry, thin, and long hair, but we could change the inner volume of the hair to make her head look smaller.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

07 Jul 2014 at 15:52

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25 year old part timer, Ms. Aimi Tachiyama's " Before and After Theme" is "Natural cute look with light, summer color and short bangs".

Before, she had no layers but had thick, heavy, bulky look.
First, we started with giving layers in the surface to define and create movements in the hair.
The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression.
We've highlighted above the ears with orange-brown color for light and casual look.
Applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch.

We have turned her dry, thin, long hair into something different by controlling the inner volume of the hair and making her head look small.

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Ms. Aimi Tachiyama, the 25 year old part timer, sets the theme for " Before and After" as a 'natural and cute look with light color and short bangs for the summer.'

She had no layers and had a bulky look.
We started with giving layers on the surface to create movements in the hair.
The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression.
We also highlighted hair above ears with orange-brown color for a light and casual look.
Finally, we applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch.

She used to have dry, thin, and long hair, but we could change the inner volume of the hair to make her head look smaller.

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