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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 04 May 2014 at 20:19
original The important tour is that from unity bridge go to Military aid, In the meantime, there were two passport inspection. After the Slide description we were signed a pledge while heart beating. Finally, the only thing we get is the camera, bus transfer joint security area .In the military armistice conference center is around by the United Nations Security Forces soldiers, we was allowed to take a picture and, with mixed feelings. Because the small tour that we get the detailed explanation by the guide,very satisfying	corrected The important tour is that from unity bridge go to Military aid, In the meantime, there were two passport inspection. After some explanation by slides, we signed a pledge, whch was heart beating. Finally, the only thing we could bring was a camera, and we transfered the bus and entered the joint security area. In the military armistice conference center, the United Nations Security Forces soldiers, who stood still, were gurding and , we were allowed to take pictures, but I felt strange. The tour was a small group with a helpful guide, so it was very satisfing.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

04 May 2014 at 20:19

original
The important tour is that from unity bridge go to Military aid, In the meantime, there were two passport inspection. After the Slide description we were signed a pledge while heart beating.
Finally, the only thing we get is the camera, bus transfer joint security area .In the military armistice conference center is around by the United Nations Security Forces soldiers, we was allowed to take a picture and, with mixed feelings.
Because the small tour that we get the detailed explanation by the guide,very satisfying

corrected
The important tour is that from unity bridge go to Military aid, In the meantime, there were two passport inspection. After some explanation by slides, we signed a pledge, whch was heart beating.
Finally, the only thing we could bring was a camera, and we transfered the bus and entered the joint security area. In the military armistice conference center, the United Nations Security Forces soldiers, who stood still, were gurding and , we were allowed to take pictures, but I felt strange.
The tour was a small group with a helpful guide, so it was very satisfing.

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