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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 03 Apr 2014 at 01:53
original The reason why electric lamps have had advantages over gas lamps after 1915 is progress of electric generation and transmission, competition among electric power companies and appearance of tungsten lamps. In addition, gas charge was increased because of material coal price going up cause by World War Ⅱ, so gas companies were forced to gradually escape from lamp market and head for exploitation of thermal demand. In Tokyo, though lamp charge was decreased in stages, it was relatively more expensive than gas or oil lamp. Thus, convenience, safety and cleanliness of use would be considered when customers chose light.	corrected The reason electric light has had advantages over gas lights since 1915 is the progress of electric power production and transmission, competition among electric power companies and the introduction of tungsten lamps. In addition, gas fees increased because the price of raw coal went up, caused by World War I, so gas companies were forced to gradually withdraw from the lighting market and force a change of course the cultivation of thermal demand. Although in Tokyo, electric light fees were reduced in stages, it was relatively more expensive than gas or oil lamps. Thus, when the consumer chose for lighting, convenience, safety, and cleanliness would also be taken into consideration.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

03 Apr 2014 at 01:53

original
The reason why electric lamps have had advantages over gas lamps after 1915 is progress of electric generation and transmission, competition among electric power companies and appearance of tungsten lamps. In addition, gas charge was increased because of material coal price going up cause by World War Ⅱ, so gas companies were forced to gradually escape from lamp market and head for exploitation of thermal demand. In Tokyo, though lamp charge was decreased in stages, it was relatively more expensive than gas or oil lamp. Thus, convenience, safety and cleanliness of use would be considered when customers chose light.

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The reason electric light has had advantages over gas lights since 1915 is the progress of electric power production and transmission, competition among electric power companies and the introduction of tungsten lamps. In addition, gas fees increased because the price of raw coal went up, caused by World War I, so gas companies were forced to gradually withdraw from the lighting market and force a change of course the cultivation of thermal demand. Although in Tokyo, electric light fees were reduced in stages, it was relatively more expensive than gas or oil lamps. Thus, when the consumer chose for lighting, convenience, safety, and cleanliness would also be taken into consideration.

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