Abdelhalim Claudine (kurojin) — Received Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 20 Jan 2014 at 22:24
Comment This looks machine translated

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 19 Sep 2013 at 15:01
original Along with that, in this work, I want Koganecho to be the goal of work depicted as a "reference point". For example)) From a house of Koganecho, in the case of a work getting out to a different town, the first is to do the work transmitting things which come from Koganecho, and to be the Koganecho station when you come back home, so trying to make a work which provide indications of things taking place at Koganecho reference point of action and so on ... It can of course take place only in Koganecho. I think assuming the work with above-mentioned conditions would be greatly appreciated. Detailed rules and points below	corrected Along with that, in this work, I want you to aim at a piece of work that depicts Koganecho to be the "reference point". For example)) In a case which a character goes out from a house in Koganecho to another town, try to make a piece that shows the character was in Koganecho at first, or shows that the character comes back to Koganecho station. In such way, you can make a piece that shows the reference point of action is at Koganecho and so on... Of course, you can just shoot scenes only at Koganecho. I'd like you to make your piece with above advises. The followings are detail rules and some points to note.

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English

19 Sep 2013 at 15:01

original
Along with that, in this work,

I want Koganecho to be the goal of work depicted as a "reference point".
For example)) From a house of Koganecho, in the case of a work getting out to a different town, the first is to do the work transmitting things which come from Koganecho, and to be the Koganecho station when you come back home, so trying to make a work which provide indications of things taking place at Koganecho reference point of action and so on ...
It can of course take place only in Koganecho.
I think assuming the work with above-mentioned conditions would be greatly appreciated.
Detailed rules and points below

corrected
Along with that, in this work,

I want you to aim at a piece of work that depicts Koganecho to be the "reference point".
For example)) In a case which a character goes out from a house in Koganecho to another town, try to make a piece that shows the character was in Koganecho at first, or shows that the character comes back to Koganecho station. In such way, you can make a piece that shows the reference point of action is at Koganecho and so on...
Of course, you can just shoot scenes only at Koganecho.
I'd like you to make your piece with above advises.
The followings are detail rules and some points to note.

Abdelhalim Claudine (kurojin) — Received Reviews

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