jaytee — Received Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 07 Nov 2013 at 11:00
original （いただいた）情報は当サービスの運営および改善に使用させていただくもので、お客様が使用する他のサービスとの関連付けは行われません。	corrected （いただいた）情報は当サービスの運営および改善に使用させていただくもので、お客様が使用する他のサービスとの関連はありません。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 07 Nov 2013 at 07:38
original （いただいた）情報は当サービスの運営および改善に使用させていただくもので、お客様が使用する他のサービスとの関連付けは行われません。	corrected （いただいた）情報は当サービスの運営および改善に使用させていただくもので、お客様が使用する他のサービスとの関連はございません。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 02 Nov 2013 at 10:00
original At any given moment nearly 2,000 thunderstorms are being produced, while 100 lightnings strike every second.	corrected At any given moment on earth nearly 2,000 thunderstorms are being produced, while 100 lightnings strike every second.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 31 Oct 2013 at 16:36
original The world of Metal music has lost one of the greatest vocalist. I'd like to convey my deepest condolences to his family and his many fans.	corrected The world of Metal music has lost one of the greatest vocalists. I'd like to convey my deepest condolences to his family and his many fans.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jul 2013 at 15:26
Comment "struggle hard"と訳してありますが、"struggle"には"hard"の意味が含まれているので"hard"は必要ないのでは？

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 19 Jul 2014 at 02:32
original Please visit my site when you have time, to check the link I've put there for your site.	corrected Please visit to check my site when you have time.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jul 2013 at 15:24
Comment "there"は、不要なのでは？

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 07 Jul 2013 at 21:07
Comment 日本語ならではの表現を、うまく英語に書き換えられていると思います。全体の意味は通じますが、冗長な表現をなくすために、"from ayu, as I'd like to reveal"の部分は、 "from ayu to reveal" に置き換えたほうがいいと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 08 Jul 2013 at 06:12
Comment absolutely"のスペルが間違っています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 08 Jul 2013 at 06:18
Comment "a live-performance"の文章は、"musician"を主語にして、"The musicians who appear in the movie perfomed live."とした方が英語として自然なのでは？

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 20 Jun 2013 at 21:54
original Thanks to everyone! The sky seen from Japan is beautiful. Hope you guys come visit here :)	corrected Thanks to everyone! Japan's sky is beautiful. Hope you guys come visit here :)

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 12 Jun 2013 at 10:32
Comment いい翻訳だと思います。