etardiff — Written Reviews
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Over 12 years ago
English (Native)
Japanese
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rated this translation result as ★★★
Japanese → English
24 Jan 2013 at 19:34
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Comment You have a couple of typos/unnatural word choices ("y" for "and", "with no fail" instead of "without fail"), and "works for other fairy m... |