Celine (celine_chanks_5124) — Written Reviews
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About 11 years ago
Singapore
English (Native)
Chinese (Simplified)
Japanese
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rated this translation result as ★★★
Japanese → English
19 Mar 2013 at 11:41
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Comment From my understanding, "また何か購入したいものがあれば" would mean requestor has bought something before and he/she is saying he will contact the seller... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★★
Japanese → English
13 Mar 2013 at 13:21
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Comment I think the execution of the first line was really well done. Overall no hint that it's a translated work, which is very good! Only gripe... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
Japanese → English
13 Mar 2013 at 13:26
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Comment I thought it would be better if you mentioned the object which you connected to the PC and iPhone in the second paragraph - would be clea... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
Japanese → English
13 Mar 2013 at 13:40
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Comment I thought "video" would be a better choice instead of "movie". I think the following conveyed the source text almost perfectly: "I... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★
Japanese → English
13 Mar 2013 at 13:44
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Comment Didn't think "I hope 12 units for $8400." makes a lot of sense to an English native. Maybe "I hope to get 12 pieces for $8400." would sli... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★★
Japanese → English
13 Mar 2013 at 13:47
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Comment Very clear and concise! Conveys the meaning of the source text perfectly. |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★
Japanese → English
13 Mar 2013 at 13:49
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Comment I think this is well done. |