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yoppo1026 rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
17 Mar 2015 at 14:54

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ウィキメディア財団と8つの団体はアメリカ国家安全保障局（NSA）及びアメリカ合衆国司法省（DOJ）に対して大規模な監視について訴訟を起こした。
ユビキタスオンライン百科辞典ワィキペディアの上部団体であるワィキメディアは8つの他団体とNSAとDOJに対して大規模な監視を停止するために訴訟を起こしたと発表します。
世界中の政府と共謀したNSAの元局員であるエドワード・スノーデンは2013年にNSAによる個人情報収集の手口を告発したのはきっかけである。

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Wikimedia Foundationと八つの組織がNSAとDOJの大量監視を告訴↵

ユビキタスオンライン百科辞典ワィキペディアの上部団体であるワィキメディアは8つの他団体とNSAとDOJに対して大規模な監視を停止するために訴訟を起こしたと発表します。
世界中の政府と共謀したNSAの元局員であるエドワード・スノーデンは2013年にNSAによる個人情報収集の手口を告発したのはきっかけである。

yxn667 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
16 Mar 2015 at 08:52

original
While riding a unique boat equipped with kotatsu (Japanese table with warmer function), you could enjoy the beauty winter scenery of Nagatoro valley Iwadatami which is one of natural monument.
From the boat you could see closely a breath taking ｀window of the world´of Iwadatami or Chichibuchi red wall.
You also could see an icicle of famous Chichibuchi water of Iwashimizu ｀rock dripping water´ during this winter season where the water dripping from the red wall.
Furthermore you could closely see a duck swimming and this will be a great experience to feel the natural beaty of Nagatoro.
You are allowed to bring food and beverage on the boat, thus you probably want to buy alcoholic drink or special local product near the market and enjoy eating and drinking at the top of Arakawa river.

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While riding a unique boat equipped with kotatsu (Japanese table with warmer function), you could enjoy the beauty winter scenery of Nagatoro valley Iwadatami which is one of the natural monuments.
From the boat you could see closely a breath taking 'window of the world' of Iwadatami or Chichibuchi red wall.
You also could see an icicle of famous Chichibuchi water of Iwashimizu 'rock dripping water' during this winter season where the water dripping from the red wall.
Furthermore you could closely see a duck swimming and this will be a great experience to feel the natural beaty of Nagatoro.
You are allowed to bring food and beverage on the boat, thus you probably want to buy alcoholic drinks or special local products in the market nearby and enjoy eating and drinking on the Arakawa river.