Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

製造工程表については、メールだけでは伝わりにくい事もありますので、現地で話しながら詳しく打ち合わせをしたいと思います。
来週か再来週の飛行機のチケットを予約しますので、また日程がわかり次第連絡します。

English

Since it is difficult to explain the manufacturing process sheet only on e-mail, I would like to visit the site to have meeting including explanation.
I will inform you my schedule after I book my flight in next week or the following week.

Reviews ( 1 )

dancingmiya rated this translation result as ★★★ 02 Jun 2016 at 18:44

original
Since it is difficult to explain the manufacturing process sheet only on e-mail, I would like to visit the site to have meeting including explanation.
I will inform you my schedule after I book my flight in next week or the following week.

corrected
Since it is difficult to explain the manufacturing process sheet only on e-mail, I would like to visit the site to have meeting including explanation.
I will book the flight for next week or the following week, so I will inform you as soon as I have my schedule.↵

（’after I book my flight in next week or the following week.’　だと「来週か再来週の飛行機」ではなく、「来週か再来週に飛行機のチケットを予約する」に捉えられてしまうかもしれません。）
前半の文章はとても良いと思います！

[shino0530]

レビューありがとうございます、確かに私もそう思います。inの代わりにforだとそのニュアンスになるかな、と考えていました。ご指摘感謝です。