Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

退院後、急いで荷物を出荷しました。
１９日に到着しているはずです。

大変申し訳ありません。
こちらのミスですのでお詫びとして
購入金額より２０％値引きします。
＄３６を入金していただけますか？

paypalからインボイスを送ります。
よろしくお願いします。

English

I sent a baggage quickly after I was dismissed from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please deposit $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

Reviews ( 2 )

jesse-oka rated this translation result as ★★★★ 26 Mar 2015 at 20:23

original
I sent a baggage quickly after I was dismissed from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please deposit $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

corrected
I sent a baggage quickly right after I was discharged from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will make a discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please do payment of $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

tani1973 rated this translation result as ★★★ 26 Mar 2015 at 22:27

original
I sent a baggage quickly after I was dismissed from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please deposit $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

corrected
I sent your order quickly after I was discharged from the hospital.
It is supposed to arrive on the 19th.

I apologize to you and I will give you a 20% discount off the purchase amount.
Could you please pay $36?

I will send an invoice via paypal.

Thank you.