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Rating: 52 / Native Japanese / 1 Review / 27 Feb 2015 at 11:45

jayem_5566
jayem_5566 52 英語から日本語の翻訳では、訳文を一度読むだけで理解できるような日本語にする...
Japanese

ご要望ありがとうございます。
お客様のご提案を参考にサイトの改善をいたします。

現在、こちらのページですべての英訳済みInstructionが同梱された商品を見ることができます。

またのご利用をお待ちしております。

English

Thank you very much for your request.
We would like to improve our sites with your suggestions.

In the following page, you can now view the product packaged together with the instructions written in English.

We are looking forward to your next visit.

Reviews ( 1 )

cielo_translation 61 2015年3月に英日翻訳でJTFほんやく検定3級を取得(翻訳士) 大学で...
cielo_translation rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 03 Mar 2015 at 12:37

original
Thank you very much for your request.
We would like to improve our sites with your suggestions.

In the following page, you can now view the product packaged together with the instructions written in English.

We are looking forward to your next visit.

corrected
Thank you very much for your request.
We would like to improve our website with your suggestions.

In the following page, you can now view the product packaged together with the instructions written in English.

We are looking forward to your next visit.

jayem_5566 jayem_5566 03 Mar 2015 at 12:45

添削をありがとうございます。ご指摘のとおり、ただの「site」では通じませんね。日本語をそのまま英語にしてしまうことが多々あるので、気をつけたいと思います。

cielo_translation cielo_translation 03 Mar 2015 at 13:08

siteでも良いようですが、この方が良いかなと思い、提案させていただきました。お互い頑張りましょう。

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