Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

打合せに関して詳細な情報をお送りいただき有難うございます。

Aさんに11:30から別のアポイントが入ってしまったので、
打合せ時間を11:00～11:30の30分間に変更願います。

ccラインに村上さんと●●さんを追加しました。
以後、本打合せに関する連絡のやり取りは彼らと調整してください。

English

Thank you for sending the detailed information regarding the meeting.

As A has another appointment at 11:00,
could you change the meeting to between 11:00 and 11:30?

We added Murakami and xx at the CC.
From now, would you adjust about the meeting with them?

Reviews ( 1 )

tani1973 rated this translation result as ★★★ 07 Feb 2015 at 17:41

original
Thank you for sending the detailed information regarding the meeting.

As A has another appointment at 11:00,
could you change the meeting to between 11:00 and 11:30?

We added Murakami and xx at the CC.
From now, would you adjust about the meeting with them?

corrected
Thank you for sending the detailed information regarding the meeting.

As A has another appointment at 11:30,
could you reschedule the meeting to between 11:00 and 11:30?

We added Murakami and xx as CC.
From now on, would you contact them to reschedule the meeting?