Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

こんにちは、私は〇〇は２こ注文して、今日一つ届いた。
もう一つは発送してくれてますか？
追跡番号を教えてほしい。

もし発送していなければ急いで送ってもらえますか？
私に連絡を下さい。

よろしくお願いします

English

Hello,I ordered two of 〇〇,and one of them arrived.
Could you send me the other one?
Please tell me the tracking number.

If you haven't send it yet,could you hurry up?
Please contact me.

Thank you.

Reviews ( 1 )

mayustardust rated this translation result as ★★★★ 10 Jan 2015 at 21:40

original
Hello,I ordered two of 〇〇,and one of them arrived.
Could you send me the other one?
Please tell me the tracking number.

If you haven't send it yet,could you hurry up?
Please contact me.

Thank you.

corrected
Hello,I ordered two of 〇〇,and one of them arrived today.
Have you sent the other one?
Please tell me the tracking number.

If you haven't send it yet,could you hurry up?
Please contact me.

Thank you.